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1223345 I'm keeping my pace, man. If you're talking about my old problem with the sex scene taking too much time, I solved it by shortening the sex scenes IF I NEED TO. In any other event, the sex will stay
Walking nightmare hmmm... This shall be interesting. i demand more! as for the vote... If i had my way i would say both. They both sound equaly good cant wait!
This story. it's so good
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What?! Who in the hay said that was a problem? Most (if not ALL) of your sex scenes are brilliantly played out, and they only improve as the story goes on. And yes, only if you need to shorten them. I wouldn't complain if a sex scene plays out the entire chapter. In fact, I think that it would be cheap if it was just thrown in for a few paragraphs with little detail put into them. I don't have to worry about that when reading your stories. You put detail in your work. Thoroughly. You have been and still are on the right track... whichever track leads to pony hell and back.
On a story related note -- you just had to delay the foursome and replace it with an interrupted wet dream, didn't you.
1230039 to answer your question: Yes.... yes I did
OMFG....
shit just got serious!
also, i'm very curious about this 'apple' secret!
In short...DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNN!!! EPIC CLIFFHANGER!!!! In long, Dots is either a reincarnation, descendant, or Stud was immortal and actually a mare. My guesses anyway.
Dots = Stod = Stud = INCOMING SHITSTORM!
Back to chapter 12. Is there even a slightest possibility that 'Stud' was the one who killed Soarin'? Considering how shredded and utterly mutilated his body was, I'm not sure if even Pinkie could that. I might be wrong, though. Was it Pinkie? Can you tell me in case I missed something?
The plot thickens. I have a feeling that next chapter will be... juicy. Also, f*ck cliffhangers! I want to see more ''Walking nightmare''! But I can wait!
I'll be following you.
...always following...
'Cause I'm Slenderman.
1235189 huh.... all I can say is that the murderer hasn't been mentioned either what sex it has or what it looks like. So no, you haven't missed anything ^^
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So it's all mystery. But I'm sure it's either Pinkie or Dots, Stud, whatever. Who else could do things like that?
Anyway, I'm waiting the next chapter for Tears of Ecstasy.
Man you made me really angry in the beginning! I thought that was real life. Soul Hook was so horribly OOC I flipped shit. It was sexy and all... but I was pouting the whole time because it came from right fucking nowhere. So when it was a dream I face-palmed.
When RD started freaking out with the whole Soarin' and Spitfire thing, I was like, "MOOOOVE ONNN!!"
I thought that was buried! W/e good job. Linnaea I need my Aloe/Lotus fix.
1235189 It's Pinkie, have you read Cupcakes? If you haven't, don't. Please.
WHAAAAT DAFUUUUQ?!
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Yes, I have read Cupcakes, thank you very much. And Rainbow factory
Yes, I'm pretty sure it was Pinkie, but after reading this chapter and realizing there's a nutcase running around, I'm not 100% sure anymore. Besides, maybe Pinkie killed someone else in her basement. Or maybe I'm just stupid.
Also, Soul Hook said he hadn't mentioned the killers name or sex yet, so it can be anypony who's crazy enough. Think about this: Maybe it wasn't Pinkie, but somepony else, and the author is only trying to confuse us. Or it was Pinkie and I'm dumb...
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1243553 we'll, let me just say that EVERYTHING in this happens for a reason