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it had beter be somepony fluttershy knows. if it was bigmac that she slept with my face =
if not. i'l have to get my hacksaw
78022 And this is ONE of the reasons i put on my "anti-hate-and-flaming-helmet
Wow, very nice, I'm gonna have to read that again, tore thru it way too fast
Didn't really leave an impact; there's nothing wrong with it (apart from the occasional spelling and grammar derps, but we all do that) but the sex isn't particularly engaging to read or horrific enough to really sink my teeth into and I'm really not sure about Applejack's character in this. Beyond that... it just didn't hold my attention. I read all the way through, like you asked, but it was like wading through a tar pit with a load of Gor novels floating on the surface. Sorry.
It's a girl, I just know it. Interesting chapter, looking forward to reading whatever is next in whatever story.
I had too many cliffhangers in the last few days. So, I'm still waiting for the bad news about Twilight that Trixie is going to tell her when she wakes up. I'm waiting for the explanation whose foal is growing inside Twilight. And now I'm waiting for you to tell me with which mare (I'm sure that it is a mare) Fluttershy spent the night with.
I don't think that it's anyone from the mane six. Only Rarity and AJ live with a foal, and they don't live in normal houses, so Soul Hook would recognize theirs. Then we have Ditzy, but she's in a relationship with Pinkie. Lyra and Bonbon.... possible but not likely. Berry Punch... Yeah that is possible.
Nonetheless, cool chapter. I like it. Still some errors, but nothing grave.
Omg I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I must know what happens next!!!
Hmmmm. I must know who this other pony is. I can't decide who it could be.
Drunkenshy is best Shy. No fear, baby!
79831 After Fluttershy got so smashed it would actually make a lot of sense if the pony is Berry Punch. I'm all for that theory!
Another chapter, another day. I enjoy this story, man. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
I didn't finish it but Fluttershy was just too out of character like befor the writing was good but the way you desriped fluttershy was just a little off putting so although I like most of your stuff this one have to be just a little bit of a failer in my eyes, sorry
The pony jokes just killed me
Trottingham, jagermarester, buck my life
You, my good sir, just won an internet