A recurring error I've noticed, ending quotations. Rule 1 for ending quotation marks, when you afterwards explain how something was said (Whispered, shouted, said, said smugly, etc) end it with a comma INSIDE the quotations and lowercase the next word. Like so:
"Hello, Silver," he greeted.
Rule 2 for ending quotation marks. When you afterwards go into something else, end with a period INSIDE the quotations and uppercase the next word. Observe:
"Congratulations, you did it." She slowly clapped her hooves together.
Rule 3 for ending quotation marks. ! ? and ... all override the comma/period rule, and names of people/places/things overrides the uppercase/lowercase rule. Watch:
5470286 This has always been an issue I've struggled with, so I thank you for correcting me. I will keep these guidelines in mind moving forward (though I doubt I'm going to go back and edit it now. This story isn't so important to me.)
So wait let me get this straight, even though it was basically FMA with ponies, you stopped working on FCW to write this? The fuck were you thinking you manic depressive asshole, you finally started to write something decent what with griffons beating the shit outa ponies and what not and you just abandon it all for this Murder She Wrote garbage? You need to get your priorities in order jesus christ.
A recurring error I've noticed, ending quotations. Rule 1 for ending quotation marks, when you afterwards explain how something was said (Whispered, shouted, said, said smugly, etc) end it with a comma INSIDE the quotations and lowercase the next word. Like so:
Rule 2 for ending quotation marks. When you afterwards go into something else, end with a period INSIDE the quotations and uppercase the next word. Observe:
Rule 3 for ending quotation marks. ! ? and ... all override the comma/period rule, and names of people/places/things overrides the uppercase/lowercase rule. Watch:
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This has always been an issue I've struggled with, so I thank you for correcting me. I will keep these guidelines in mind moving forward (though I doubt I'm going to go back and edit it now. This story isn't so important to me.)
5470454 No problem. Keep up the good work.
Disaster averted... for now.
after reading them all in one go
i must say, this is what i wanted... this is what i needed... you do know how to write them well
So wait let me get this straight, even though it was basically FMA with ponies, you stopped working on FCW to write this? The fuck were you thinking you manic depressive asshole, you finally started to write something decent what with griffons beating the shit outa ponies and what not and you just abandon it all for this Murder She Wrote garbage? You need to get your priorities in order jesus christ.
5449296 Why you gotta lie to people like that?
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Hey! Hey! Psst! I've got a sectret!
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Shut the fuck up or leave. You don't like that he stopped writing something, you fucking write it.