Quick couple of questions. First the whole age thing is a bit confusing. He says it's only been 60 years since his friends died, which would be when he got the magic and such, but then says that he's tens of thousands of years old to his sister, and that he's done so much in that time. How does that work?
Second, are you going to be clarifying some more things later on, such as the details of Dust's magic, Pandora's history, and the likes?
Lastly, do you have a set schedule for releases, with chapters done already, or do you just upload them as you finish them?
5763037 Hmmm mind if I answer the first in a blog so I won't have to rewrite this over and over again? The second is yes. Third at least once a month. After every chapter I start on the new one and usually finish it by the second week .... then I spend the next week or more re-writing or polishing it. I check for grammer (enen though I'm horrible at it) wording, and play the scences out in my head. then I release and repeat. I want to get one out every two weeks, but I have other things to do so it might take a few months for that to happen.
Every time I read this, I'm tempted to ask for 'moar', but I don't, because I'm not that big of a dick. ... ... ... I give it a week before temptation gets the better of me.
6134998 You have a grammatical error! When hyphenating 'you are', you must put a hyphen after the 'u' and an 'e' after the 'r'. Other than that, you're golden. ;)
Fun.
YAAASSSSSS
Looks great!! Hail King Dust
I like it please keep going
Quick couple of questions.
First the whole age thing is a bit confusing. He says it's only been 60 years since his friends died, which would be when he got the magic and such, but then says that he's tens of thousands of years old to his sister, and that he's done so much in that time. How does that work?
Second, are you going to be clarifying some more things later on, such as the details of Dust's magic, Pandora's history, and the likes?
Lastly, do you have a set schedule for releases, with chapters done already, or do you just upload them as you finish them?
5763037 Hmmm mind if I answer the first in a blog so I won't have to rewrite this over and over again? The second is yes. Third at least once a month. After every chapter I start on the new one and usually finish it by the second week .... then I spend the next week or more re-writing or polishing it. I check for grammer (enen though I'm horrible at it) wording, and play the scences out in my head. then I release and repeat. I want to get one out every two weeks, but I have other things to do so it might take a few months for that to happen.
Must have more
MOAR!
5763037 THAT is a cool profile pic.
Love it MOAR!!
5763078 I'm confused, with this amount of people asking for more, how do you have so many dislikes?
5772992 I personally think it was just first assumptions.
What.....what do I think...
What I think is, and I quote here...
MOAR!!!!!!!
5828380 well between the 15th and 22nd is my due date.
5828921 *squee*YAAAAAY!!!
Pm if you need any help for like prereading or stuff like that.
5828932 I have plenty, trust me I have multiple others read a chapter before I put it out. Also an editor so
5828946 that's good! always nice to have backup help incase something comes up. I just like helping the fandom. Happy writing dood!
Every time I read this, I'm tempted to ask for 'moar', but I don't, because I'm not that big of a dick.
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I give it a week before temptation gets the better of me.
Damn. Its always the good stories that get no updates
5939658 it is at editor now.
6134998 You have a grammatical error! When hyphenating 'you are', you must put a hyphen after the 'u' and an 'e' after the 'r'. Other than that, you're golden. ;)
You've done a great job keep up the good work
He went to the Cubert? To this?:
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...... Naw, I think he went to the cupboard . To this:
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I thought the whole thing was a flashback but apparently he just decided to tell 5 strangers his life story. Why?