Well.....That escalated quickly...Wonder how princess rage quit is gonna handle what's gonna happen next and I have a feeling Dust is about to go Donkey Kong on Discord come next chapter which is gonna be fun, can't wait
5946436 nit-picking... can you turn it off? seriously though, it's not as if you can't read it and understand the point he's trying to get across. and spell-check doesn't fix everything.
5952133 I've purposely mispelled some words within this story to give the characters a personality or accent. Other than that, I didn't notice any non purpose mispellings in gdocs. If I missed any my editor will right my wrongs like the awsome super editor he is!
You guys know what's funny? This. This whole situation. Now do you wanna know why it's funny? Hmm? It's funny because any and all authors (myself included) hate it more the anything 9/10 times when someone starts shit in the comments. Keep in mind he reads the comments for FEEDBACK and the likes.
Not to hear you two bitching at each other. So would you both be so kind as to suck it up and not do this again? Please?
Anyways. Nice job author. I can't wait for the next part! Though I would suggest to look over a few of the issues like Nathaniel was complaining about(even if I didn't find any) there are some moment when expierienced readers mentally fix things they think are grammar issues before finishing a sentence, but this isn't your fault at all. Doin great bro. Keep up the good work!
5971639 thx, I don't mind if you tell me something is wrong, but if you are please point out what it is exactly. Just tell me there is a few things wrong, but not what exactly, is the equivalent to giving CPR to a headshot wound, it won't do jack.
5972030 I Didn't really find much wrong with the story itself, but some readers anticipate so to speak and they change the words around in their head instead of reading on. :3 I think your doin good bro!
(P.s- CPR to a gunshot wound would TOTALLY save a person......or naw......probably naw...
5993643 Wait this looks rushed, I thought this was going to slow! The only reason it may seem rushed is maybe how Dust handles this whole situation? If that is the case, the explanation is he has done this many, many, many times. Or is it the characters reactions? Let me know so I can improve!
i have been looking for a cross over with this anime for a long time, im glad that i finally found one.
5940299 it is but it isn't, read and you will see.
5940299 what anime?
MORE!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More!!!!!!!!!
Just wait, folks, some minor edits and fixes are on the way!
5939658 Also the reason they get no updates is that they take time.
Well.....That escalated quickly...Wonder how princess rage quit is gonna handle what's gonna happen next and I have a feeling Dust is about to go Donkey Kong on Discord come next chapter which is gonna be fun, can't wait
Spell-check, do you even use it?
5946436 nit-picking... can you turn it off? seriously though, it's not as if you can't read it and understand the point he's trying to get across. and spell-check doesn't fix everything.
Great story so far Dontaskaboutit. keep it up!!
5952133 I've purposely mispelled some words within this story to give the characters a personality or accent. Other than that, I didn't notice any non purpose mispellings in gdocs. If I missed any my editor will right my wrongs like the awsome super editor he is!
5952133 there were a couple of times during the story when i went "wait what" and still couldn't understand jack.
5954034 mind pointing out were? Because just telling me doesn't do much.
5954227 i don't remember now and i don't feel like re-reading, sorry.
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You guys know what's funny? This. This whole situation.
Now do you wanna know why it's funny? Hmm? It's funny because any and all authors (myself included) hate it more the anything 9/10 times when someone starts shit in the comments. Keep in mind he reads the comments for FEEDBACK and the likes.
Not to hear you two bitching at each other.
So would you both be so kind as to suck it up and not do this again? Please?
Anyways. Nice job author. I can't wait for the next part! Though I would suggest to look over a few of the issues like Nathaniel was complaining about(even if I didn't find any) there are some moment when expierienced readers mentally fix things they think are grammar issues before finishing a sentence, but this isn't your fault at all. Doin great bro. Keep up the good work!
~sparkle on!
5971639 thx, I don't mind if you tell me something is wrong, but if you are please point out what it is exactly. Just tell me there is a few things wrong, but not what exactly, is the equivalent to giving CPR to a headshot wound, it won't do jack.
5972030 I Didn't really find much wrong with the story itself, but some readers anticipate so to speak and they change the words around in their head instead of reading on. :3 I think your doin good bro!
(P.s- CPR to a gunshot wound would TOTALLY save a person......or naw......probably naw...
5993643 Wait this looks rushed, I thought this was going to slow! The only reason it may seem rushed is maybe how Dust handles this whole situation? If that is the case, the explanation is he has done this many, many, many times. Or is it the characters reactions? Let me know so I can improve!
6004138 Don't ask about it.
What just happened? Is this his friend?
6134998 Thanks, now give me a few minutes and I will have the next grammar disaster up!