When Princess Celestia allows Princess Luna to bring back an ancient festival celebrating the more... debaucherous parts of the night, the mane six are more than eager to help promote the event.
5655294 Is that how you see things? That's not exactly what I thought. At the very worst, Suri could only attempt to berate her for being a slut; but at that time, I would think Rarity could challenge Suri for her blatant voyeurism. I encourage you to read the conclusion again to see if perhaps things might appear differently.
5657742 Mmh... I think I may get what you meant. Maybe. I feel there's a missed opportunity in this chapter... Like it would have been more ''appropriate'', more 'fresh' so to speak, if it had been handled more in a 'sensual' sexual way, rather than the ''blablabla-force'' rinse and repeat we got again. Not that it was 'bad', but... you know...
Like it could, or should have been more tailored to Rarity's style, one could say. More emphasis on the beast being, almost-kinda-'if applicable to tentacle beast?' gentleman-like in its manners, as if it was sensing the pony's personality or something.
Poor Rarity, she's going to hate herself when she remembers that Suri was watching the whole thing.
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Is that how you see things? That's not exactly what I thought. At the very worst, Suri could only attempt to berate her for being a slut; but at that time, I would think Rarity could challenge Suri for her blatant voyeurism. I encourage you to read the conclusion again to see if perhaps things might appear differently.
This chapter feels wrong somehow
5657742 I can't help but to agree with you
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I seem then to have missed the mark at some point. Could either of you then explain to me what exactly feels wrong about this?
Rarity took that really well, there are two side to pretty much everything in life after all. Also that was hot!
5655347 the perfect comeback if Suri decided to insult rarity about participating:
"You think it was unladylike for me to participate? You knew I was going to join, and you wanted to watch my performance."
Also...I feel like this chapter was somehow inspired by this:
Except, you know, less mud and more...yeah
5657742 Mmh... I think I may get what you meant. Maybe.
I feel there's a missed opportunity in this chapter... Like it would have been more ''appropriate'', more 'fresh' so to speak, if it had been handled more in a 'sensual' sexual way, rather than the ''blablabla-force'' rinse and repeat we got again. Not that it was 'bad', but... you know...
Like it could, or should have been more tailored to Rarity's style, one could say. More emphasis on the beast being, almost-kinda-'if applicable to tentacle beast?' gentleman-like in its manners, as if it was sensing the pony's personality or something.