Okay, I'll admit. I don't normally read pony clop. It's not really my cup of tea, since I can't enjoy it erotically with ponies (as opposed to anthro or humanized).

However, the plot here - as well as the set up for consenticles - has grabbed me. I will be reading this.

Tentacle monster, not usually my thing, but, ill make an exception...............translation: MOAR!!!

Chapter one: The Proposition:

“Of... a sorts, yes,” Luna said with an amused smile.

"A sort" or "sorts."

Parties are great but festivals are even better!”

Missing comma, great butt.

An interesting beginning to what is looking like six chapters of gratuitous tentacle ravishing.

I look forward to it.

~KBO.

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“Please, allow us to escort you upstairs. Dinner is minutes away from being served, and the princesses are ready for you upstairs.”

A bit repetitive, don't ya think?

“I would love to get a close-up look at this creature for, er... studies and whatnot.

This is the equivalent of seeing a hot gril and asking about her name for...research... Good job Twilight.

“However long it wants to, I guess.”

In b4 100,000 word chapter.

Dis gon b gud. i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/293/590/6f6.gif

Why can't we have festivals like this irl?

This is going to be fun!

Celestia: "Screw it, just summon the tentacle monsters!"

Luna: "Oh, all right... Uhm... tentacle monsters... heeeeeeere... Ok, I think that did it."

Celestia: "Now you will deal with the many protruding tentacles of the violating tentacle monsters!"

Spike: "Don't worry, Rarity, I'll protect you!"

Celestia: "I was talking to YOU, baldy!"

*Spike screams like a girl*

Why do I get that the idea that Fluttershy is going to win?

Two things.

1 a full minute? for a creature with no hands? A standard rodeo for humans is... 8 seconds?

2 PAPEEEEEER! Parchment is made of dried (parched) animal skins

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& i like your taste.

I'm... a tad surprised at how everyone so easily agreed with this...

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Well, Dash instigated competition with AJ and, somehow, Rarity, and got Fluttershy interested with the creature itself. Pinkie just loves festivals, and Twilight...wants...research. Yeah, research. On the big tentacle monster. That should be done personally.

Eh.

The prose in this first chapter felt a little stunted.
(I got a lot of flak for 'telling' in my collab submission, so this stuff is standing out to me)

Oh well! *claps hooves together* Allons-y~

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I foresee no way this could go wrong