She was back at the Gala, amid the falling pillars and crazed animals. She saw the flock of birds swooping around a still, red form and rushed towards them, shouting Macintosh’s name.
“Sis! Help!”
She turned just in time to see them mob Apple Bloom. When had she gotten there?! Applejack attacked the birds, using her hooves and even teeth in a vain attempt to get them off, but it was hopeless. By the time the birds flew away, Apple Bloom was gone. So was Macintosh. She had lost them both!
“Give ‘em back!” she shouted at the birds circling above. “Give back mah family!!!” The room began to shake as the ceiling collapsed…
“Wake up! Miss Applejack, wake up!” Applejack’s eyes shot open to reveal Blueblood. He had been shaking her, and quickly removed his hoof from her shoulder. “I… I apologize for entering your room without permission, but I could hear you screaming across the hall and was concerned that…”
What happened next surprised them both. Applejack wrapped her hooves around him, hugging him tightly. It was partially to shut him up, but part her needing to cling to something real, something comforting. Blueblood was flustered but hugged her back awkwardly, trying to balance on his hind legs. Unfortunately his sense of balance was bad, and he crashed to the floor, dragging the unwitting Applejack down with him.
“Are… are you alright, Miss Applejack?”
“Ah’m fine, jist knocked my head on the floor. Ah’ll live!” She laughed as he tried to right himself but became entangled in the quilt that she had pulled to the floor. He grinned sheepishly as she began helping him pull it off.
“What’s goin’ on in here?”
The voice made them both jump. Big Macintosh was standing in the doorway, his face calm except for a single raised eyebrow.
“Oh, uh, Big Macintosh! Didn’t hear ya come in. I was jist havin’ a nightmare an’ Blueblood was checkin’ up on me.” Applejack rubbed her head where she hit the floor, smiling contritely at her brother. Macintosh looked at Blueblood sharply.
“Then Ah reckon Blueblood was jist leavin’.”
Blueblood had finally unraveled himself and stood, nodding meekly at them both. “Good night, Miss Applejack… Big Macintosh…” He hurried past him to his own room. Big Macintosh glared as he trotted past.
“Was that really necessary, Big Macintosh? He didn’t do nothin’ wrong!”
Big Macintosh looked at her levelly. “T’ain’t proper for a stallion o’ his age t’ be sneakin’ into a filly’s room at night.”
“I ain’t a filly, Macintosh! And Blueblood was only concerned fer mah safety wuz all!”
Macintosh frowned. “Ah believe ya, Applejack. Ah’m only concerned fer yer safety too.” He turned and left, telling her good night, and Applejack tossed the quilt back up on her bed. She was irritated at Big Macintosh’s lack of trust in her, but it wasn’t like being angry was going to change his mind. Better to worry about it in the morning, after she’d had some sleep to clear her head.
Never had a younger sister to look after. I had an older sister but she went crazy and fled the country to become a pygmy. I don't get it either... Ahem. Anywhoo, this is a prime example of what I was talking about earlier. You haven't really explored the depths of what this could be. Example, with the nightmare, you had that point where Applejack realized her family was gone. Imagine how that would feel for a moment. Now, write it down. Then imagine the thoughts of dispair and loss the hopelessness that would be felt in that situation. Now, write them down. That is one example. Then take Applejack's thoughts about her brother and all of the questions that she would have about why he would bother with Blueblood, when she hasn't shown any interest in him.
I'm both a younger and older brother, and I gotta tell you that you're not missing anything all that great. Worrying about what some newcomer is going to do to someone precious to you is hardly enjoyable. It's usually frustrating, anxiety inducing, maddening, and has the lovely bit of making you feel powerless when the one precious to you gets hurt anyway leaving no way to for you to do anything about it beyond trying to be a comfort.
The reason you go through with all that heartache that makes you feel so impotent is because of how much you care about those you love. You can't help it.
Dang Applejack really is having bad nightmares about what happened at the gala huh but it looks like Prince Blueblood wanted to check on her if she's okay but a fast reflex Applejack hugged him and he hugged back but tripping both of them on the floor and Big Mac what's not too Keen on what's going on here I guess when it comes to protecting your own family you get overprotective