The Doctor is in!

and you kept him as a time lord ! LAN parties in school damn why the hell were none of my classes that awsome (ok so we might have done it when we were supposed to be working but it wasn't curiculum........Im a bad pony....... and i love it).

I think this will be better and better in the next Chapters!

lowl tweill be awsome keep flyin high!

So far, so good. I'm liking the concept, though the first few chapters seem a bit too introductory-like. They kinda read like a forward in a novel. I can't wait for you to reach the meat and potatoes of the story. TwiLina has become my favorite ponyship, ever, even beating out Twinkie-Pie! And giving Twilight and Luna mad violin and viola skills was an awesome idea. I could easily see them playing some classical music like Pachebel's Canon in D with Octavia, Lyra, and Vinyl, maybe with Fluttershy singing some vocal accompaniment, before busting out with Bad Romance or something. Keep up the good work!

496726 eh with a story like this it needs a lot ofi ntrouction, that will stop after Advanced Magics and OM are introduced- so to speak- and after that I'll start making it fun

I think Whooves broke the rules....

WHO! AMAZING! and PonyStation 3 and P-box 360 are just excellent. might I suggest a Pontendo Ponycube? would be excellent for Super Smash Ponies :) and of course The Doctor himself was just amazing. Everyone loves Who :) But Derpy? it does indeed explain the rather... unusual side to the muffin loving hottie.

Loving this so far