So he meets one person that's a moron and he decides the city isn't worth working in?

5214928 Keep in mind that he was on the fence about the job. That just pushed him over the edge.

5214951 It's just rather as bigoted as he considered that asshole. Oh hey one guy is an asshole *Writes off the entire city of Canterlot as similar to him*

Ok, this chapter was great. He operation scene was well-written and I enjoyed seeing Carter having so much in common with Celestia.

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I think it's more a situation of, he doesn't know anyone in Canterlot, compared to in Ponyville where he already knows what the people are like, has friends etc. If the odds were that he would have to operate with others who were just as stuck up as this one grade S moron on a regular basis, then he didn't want to make the move.

Think of it as seeing the sides of a coin, one side holds the people like S grade moron here, while the other shows a much brighter side, the side that shows people like Celestia and Fleur, which, despite physical limitations, appears to be larger than it's opposing face. If you only meet people who show off the negative, obviously you'll having a negatively biased opinion.

I cant for the life of me figure out who youre pairing this guy with.

wow very very nice

Carter's determination as a doctor reminds me of Doctor Tony Tony Chopper, a fictional reindeer/human hybrid who is a pirate doctor in the Anime One Piece -

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Mention of One Piece causes the opening theme song the instantly start playing in my head.

Anyone else hear "House's" voice here?

6276355 Only misses a meaner streak, a cane and there we go.

Of all the unbelieveable bullcrap of read in fanfics, this takes the cake.

When I was comfy, I took a bite out of the light blue popsicle in my right hand.

Took a bite of ice cream?! That's just plain inhuman!

6706460 ... I bite into Popsicles.

6905579 So do I, quite painful but tasty nonetheless!
Awesome work on this chapter by the way, awesomeness incarnate!

The only people who bite their Popsicle's or Ice cream are Russians and demons, of which Carter is neither...

This story is pretty well done. The only thing i'd like to see more of are more full and descriptive sentences. The ponies themselves you have described very well so far and it is much appreciated, though the scenery descriptions could use more detail. The transition from one scene to the next happens so briefly it feels a bit jarring, for example from the waiting room to the castle bedroom was a little fast, I had no idea what route they took or if they passed anyone (surely the guards would have had a reaction even if only facial). Maybe add in more facial expressions to the ponies when they react or respond to Carter. I realize it's early in the story at this point, but those are just my thoughts. I shall continue :D

Fun fact, did you know that your organs are self Correcting? When a doctor "returns" your intestines, he just tosses them in, they will correct themselves.

I honestly forget if they tended to do this in Trauma Center, but even when delivering good news doctors will be way more evasive. Promising that someone will live and then having a complication come up will tend to lead to lawsuits.