Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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5556596
nonono, he will bleed, FOREVER!
that way is the correct way.
also cut off his wang too, and punch his face,
This ^
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Whoops, fixed a discontinuity with Fred's clothes. Button up pajamas for the win. Sorry 'bout that!
It seems Luna got a little bit of that sauce on her. Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge.
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Ah, I was wondering when you would be doing some boob-action.
Nicely done.
> open Fimfiction
> See a story in the feature box
> mfw the author is Flammenwerfer
> how did I not notice this when it was first written
> http://clay.blorgblorgbl.org/images/reactions/ofhappenings.gif
e: > mfw the release schedule on this one helps explain the release schedule of Metroid: Equis
(jk Flammen take the time you need, M:E is a fantastic story, don't rush it)
this is a very good chapter, a very very good chapter
also why do I get a feeling that the Ponyville trip is where the excrement shall strike the admirer
5564937 HAHAHAHA hey there!! Not entirely actually. There's some... Stuff going on in life right now and for all intents and purposes, I need to write some stuff that's a bit lighter in moods. That, and and chapter 31 is goddamn long and difficult. It is the pivotal chapter because once that's done, we have one more before all the major stuff is over. Last hurdle then we're home free, and now that I dropped this chapter im gonna focus my attention there
5564998 Hah, roger that. I definitely understand "stuff going on in life," and I was mainly poking fun. Like I said, I love M:E to pieces, and I'm glad to hear that progress is being made, whatever the pace.
Interested to hear that we're just about at the height of the fever pitch, and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds from here BLAH BLAH WHY AM I TALKING ABOUT METROID EQUIS ON ANOTHER STORY'S COMMENT FEED.
If there's anything I can do, lemme know and I'll be happy to help.
5565011 Oh I know you were poking fun lol. And just keep leaving your feedback, that's what ultimately helps me the most! Glad you're still enjoying the ride :D. This is where I usually write when I stall on Equis, as I'm sure you can see
5565026 I'm definitely getting that impression, that your attention shifts between this and M:E. Not that I blame you, it keeps your mind fresh.
nice
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stay classy
5565241
1. both actually work.
2. you are correct, used the indirect object versus a direct object.
3. both work, but upon works better.
See? this is why you'd be perfect lol
Ok first off I love thus story, it's clean(kinda), it's organized, and adorable. Honestly I reread chapters just for the he'll of it. Btw not to be creepy but when Luna said that she's seen all his fantasies I was wondering if there was going to be some fetishes in the future?
A pleasure like always.
5565778 'clean' haha
And yes, in one of the author's notes, I said there would be some 'mild' fetish play here on both sides. For example, some breast play in this chapter, and I'm still working out what else there would be. BDSM nor scat nor faux-rape fantasies will be included as per 'mild,' but yes, there will be some 'kinks' if you will. No worries about being 'creepy,' this is pretty much a clopfic and as such, there's little in the way of moral high ground lol
I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far, and I hope you continue to do so!
5564916 Haha hope it lived up to its hype!
woot
5565265
"Haste" is actually grammatically incorrect; to demonstrate this, chop the sentence to "gave a haste." That doesn't make sense, and doesn't imply that there's a word missing. "Haste" is here being used along with "courteous" to modify "bow," which in this case is being used as a noun. "Haste" is also a noun, and can't be used to modify a noun; you'd want the adjective form of haste, which is "hasty."
(god I am going to be the most neurotic editor)
Yay bewbs!
5566207 ... yeah, you're perfect for the job
Fredrick was never a religious man, but he now firmly believed that if he found salvation in Jesus, Allah, Yahweh, Cthulhu, and Shrek the Ogrelord simultaneously, this is exactly what it would feel like.
Cthulhu.
So.... c is the third letter of the alphabet. ... ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED.
In all seriousness, is that a real religious god? Or just a Terraria reference?
5566749 Cthulu was something HP Lovecraft came up with.
5564613 Thus far this Blueblood hasn't warranted enough for that.
Maybe later, but not now.
This is seriously alot of adorableness, notning I can't handle.
Twelve hour time hasn't been invented yet they still use 24 hour time!
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Statement edited for greater accuracy. There's a reason that any game featuring Ol' Squidy requires a fistful of dice to measure the SAN loss when the characters are in his presence .
5567896 IYT NEVER SAYS ANYTHING IN THE SHOW
Bewb job! Huzzah!!
5573420 The fun has been Double-D
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Yes, I know this but if you follow technology advancement in societies twelve hour falls in place not 12. And I'm giving feedback I'm not Flaming you so please don't yell at me.
This was amazing! No wonder I placed this story into the Memorable bookshelf.
If I might add, your description is so fitting and to me, new, that I find myself reading every single word with intensity. And this scene almost made me say fuck it and just halt it right there, look up something "pleasing" and finish myself.
No story before had such effects on my state. I've been emotionally moved from happy, depressing, funny, deep, infuriating, or uplifting stories and scenes, but yours! You gave me a new experience! After experiencing rage from a story once, now I experienced the aforementioned feeling, which affected me physically!
Now I wish I could favorite this and like this again. You would deserve it...
Have a wonderful day!
~Adam
5579623 I'm certainly glad that you're enjoying everything as much as you say you are! I'm honored that you think so highly of my work, and I hope you continue to enjoy it :D
5579564 i know i was joking when i put it in full caps
5581377 At this rate, my entertainment can very easily be arranged. Keep it up!
5583289
I figured but If they did have 12 hour time it wouldn't make much sense
5583798 oh. and thy have a cloack tower so 12 hour time has been invented
5574633
It's almost midnight right now and I lungs almost blew up from from holding in my laughter
5594426 #verified
Best tit job I have ever read!
Blurblood better be careful what he wish for.
5654935 Gotta lower the moon and stuff. Probably not gonna wanna do with with bra off
5663804 That is true isn't it? I think I may have put 'possible' concussion but I can't remember. I may change that though, thanks for pointing that out. Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
I think "reaching the fabric's absorption limit" would flow better.
You know what to do.
I don't know how I didn't read this chapter already. Must have clicked on it then somehow killed my laptop.
5655123 Why not? I bet Luna enjoyed it when certain ponies drank a little of this and eat a little of that before getting frisky under the light of a full moon back during the Pagan times. (Not like anypony's watching her raise the moon in a creepy stalker way with a high-powered telescope, right?)
Really? Shrek?