Rarity turned in her bed a bit, the morning sun poking through the curtains on the wall. Despite the rough night she somehow had avoided a hangover and, even more impressive, get some sleep. She rolled gently out of bed and trotted over to her day planner. She looked closely at something she must have written in a hurry, as the writing was scrawled.
"Hmm...Party...Planning...with...Pinkie Pie?" She read in her head and out loud and then she repeated it "Party planning with Pinkie Pie!!! How could I let myself forget? Spikey Wikeys Birthday is coming up!" She giggled to herself, She had been waiting on an opportunity to plan the events for months and it was finally here.
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After settling herself down and showering Rarity took a moment to look at the mirror, She did not remember doing anything different with her mane, but there was a glow about her she could feel. She gave her reflection a wink and giggled.
"Oh my my my... I feel like a school-filly.. but I do look quite amazing..." she was interrupted by a loud meow from her cat Opalescence and simply replied "Yes Opal... I am sexy and I know it!" Laughing to herself as she finished she made her way downstairs for breakfast, but not without her gorgeous fire-ruby, as of late no day was complete without the gem she held so dear.
Every minute she grew happier, as it was a minute close to planning Spikes birthday party. With Pinkie Pie's help it was a sure-fire success, not to mention that she Pinkie-Pie-Swore not to divulge Rarity's little secret, which was indeed helpful. After her breakfast she trotted happily out the door to be met with the face of Twilight Sparkle.
"Twilight darling is there something you need? I was on my way to see Pinkie Pie" Rarity said, hoping that the Purple Unicorn had good news.
" Well...I know we Agreed upon me not sending Spike any more letters...But...He never said you couldn't...So I was wondering if maybe you...Could?" Twilight said, she was smiling sheepishly, her eyes hopeful.
"I would be more than happy...but Could it wait till later dear? I will stop by the library at 3:00 PM sharp, But Right now I must go see Pinkie Pie, It is of the utmost Importance and she will be expecting me." Rarity said Her smile growing wider. Twilight Smiled and nodded in return,Something however was off about her, Something Rarity couldn't quite put her hoof on.
Rarity continued her way to Sugarcube corner, Waving goodbye to Twilight. She hoped that a letter from herself might convince Spike to return, She hated to admit it but she was still a little angry at Twilight for letting it happen. Of course Twilight was still her friend, as long as Spike returned all would be well.
As she trotted she could not help but admire the clear sky, Rainbow Dash had outdone herself and it seemed the perfect setting for what she hoped would be a great day. As she Approached Sugarcube Corner she suppressed a giggle, the time had finally come for the party planning.
"Cup Cake? Might I ask Where Pinkie Pie is? I believe she should be expecting me." Rarity Said to the light Cerulean Mare, Almost beaming.
"Why yes, she is upstairs go on up." Said Mrs. Cake, Smiling in return.
Rarity Began her way up the stairs, and tapped gently on Pinkies room door. To her surprise the door flew open and she was met with Pinkie Pie's Smiling face.
"Hey Rarity I knew you would be by! So I have a BUNCH of ideas that will be PERFECT for Spikes party and I can't wait to talk so comeincomeincomein!!!" Pinkie said with her usual abundance of energy.
Stepping in Rarity greeted her friend trying to maintain her usual Calm demeanor. They wasted no time in planning, everything from the punch bowl to the banners had to be perfect. What she would usually find over the top she knew would be genius, subtlety was not necessary at this point and could prove to hinder her plans. They started with the simplest thing there was, the guest list, Rarity wanted everypony possible to be there, Mayor Mare, Zecora, all the unique characters she met around town would have to be there for her plans to go properly.
Ponyville Park was the only place Rarity could imagine the party, the library was certainly too small, and the natural moonlight would compliment the music, and more importantly accentuate the outfit she had planned for the evening. As her and Pinkie wrote their ideas down they found themselves taking up several pages with ideas, which only delighted Rarity even further. Pinkie Pie would prepare delicious food, while she would choose, or make if need be, the decorations.
As the planning went on the two of them pieced together the perfect celebration, the only thing missing was the guest of honor. It mattered not though, if anypony could change the mind of somebody as stubborn as Spike, it was going to be Rarity, a thought she happily compared to what could be the ending of a good romance novel. Pinkie meanwhile was hard at work, Already working on the Invitations for the party.
"Pinkie dear? It has been great spending this time planning the party, but I promised Twilight I would stop by the library in about 15 minutes, could you perhaps carry on without me?" Rarity said smiling at the pink earth pony in front of her.
"Oh no problem Rarity, you go on ahead, there is not much left to do anyways. Don't worry, there is no party like a Pinkie-party, I cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye PROMISE Spike will love the party!" Pinkie said bouncing and pantomiming her signature promise to her friend.
`Rarity Wave farewell,whether the party went according to plan or not, Rarity did not really care, her only thought was that her dear Spikey Wikey would think it was The...Best...Possible...THING!
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Author Note: Sorry the update took forever, Hope you all enjoy the chapter, Sorry if it is not on par with my others, been a ridiculously long month..er...last month was that is...Next update will come when I have time
I do hope rarity will convince Spike to come home
I actually like the idea of Spike staying in the forest better than going back. Call me crazy, but that's what I want every character in that situation to do. It just appeals to me.
1549880 Very wrong.
1550022 wait till the next chapter :P
1550111 It is a nice concept, and shall be revisited, All I shall say :P
Skipped forward to see if the writing improved. Nope. All the issues from the first chapter remain, you aren't giving your writing the time and care that is needed for quality.
1550175 I said I would edit when I had time, as my luck would have it, I have none this week, I am a man of my word however, improvements will be made
If any pony can convince Spike to come to this party it's Rarity. Keep up the good work I look forward to seeing how this continues. Rarity certainly has a great deal more tact than Twilight usually dose as well. No sense in trying to predict your story just look forward to seeing where you take it.
1550194 The issues are present in a freshly uploaded chapter. Saying you'll edit the first when you can't get the new stuff right doesn't fill me with confidence. In short, if it isn't right when you release it, you shouldn't be releasing it at all.
Releasing a chapter without proper editing is one of the biggest rookie mistakes you can make. NEVER upload a new chapter you just finished. Delay the release a day or two to give it a thorough editing and proofreading. Otherwise you'll have guys like me, who are tired to repeating this over and over, on your case.
1550235 was really supposed to be Spike thinking to himself, I shall remove it for the sake of the story
1550237 Ok ok you do not like that my story is rough, I get it. How about you be my proof reader than? I am terrible with grammar, I know it... you are obviously Better then me with it. well? are you going to give me a hard time, or help me?
And to both of you, (as well as any other Grammatical nuts) I do Appreciate feedback.
1550313 It sounds cliche, But the simple things count the most in any relationship, be it friendship or romance.
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No, as a proper lady she would never resort to violence. Even when she was enslaved the most she did was whine. Not only that, but have ever seen a girl react so seriously to an offence like that? The worst I've ever seen (carried out by a woman) is a punch to the face. When you involve a woman's boyfriend, shit gets really serious; I remember a dude getting a broken arm from a martial-arts master whom's girlfriend he picked on.
'Sides, her magic isn't strong enough to pick him up, though her finesse with magic is extremely admirable.
1550300 Ah, but if I do it for you, how will you learn?
1550300 This really needs a proofreader. The story is good, but the grammar is painful. I suggest throwing your story in the looking for editors group. That should help provide you with the assistance you need.
I liked it.. I foresee a fight between spike and rarity though.
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Well, It is better than you pestering me. I have very little time, I choose to get the story out of my head before It disappears. You can either trust that I will go through and edit the story myself, or do It for me, either way the story will be fixed...
1553599 I thank you kindly
1554052 trying to predict something I am writing is as pointless as counting the drops of water in the ocean :P
ha ha "The...Best...Possible...THING!" made me laught xDD