A Simple Annoyance
Rarity walked through town, having just shipped out one of her latest projects she found some extra time on her hooves. In the back of her mind the unicorn wished that Spike could be there, the dragon was always so eager to help her with her shopping, but she sighed, perhaps a few extra trips wouldn't be too bad. That day she had decided to wear her Fire ruby, something that had drawn the eyes of many stallions throughout the marketplace. Though she appreciated it to a degree, she found the new found forwardness of some stallions, rather irritating.
Stopping by Sugarcube Corner to get herself something to eat, she yet again turned heads, and why wouldn't she? why, The fire ruby was simply gorgeous. Perhaps she would find herself less annoyed if the ruby was the gem that grasped their attention, rather than the diamonds on her flanks. Trotting up to the counter she ordered herself a slice of raspberry angels-food cake, and not a moment later she heard from a nearby table,
"Yeah I got something I can feed ya, you little angel"
Ignoring it she simply sat several tables away, eating quietly. It was not the rudest comment she had heard all day, but still, If Spike were here he wouldn't have let that happen, he would have stood up for me She thought to herself. Finishing her food quickly she left, as she had much to buy and little time to do it in.
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As the day dragged on Rarity had become increasingly tense. A whistle and a wink every now and then was fine, flattering even, but most of the day had been smug comments. As she made her way home she hummed to herself, the day was done, she could have herself a glass of wine with rose salad, and then she could...
*SMACK*
Her flank stung, turning to her right she saw a grinning pegasus, one of his wings outstretched, as if brandishing an invisible trophy. Rarity was at a loss of words, she quickly made her way home, wanting to get away from the one who slapped her flank.
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Upon getting home she sniffled as she closed the door, trying to push it to the back of her mind. She prepared her dinner, and drank three times the amount of wine she originally planned. Stumbling up her stairs her sniffling continued, by the time she had reached the top her tears ran free down her face. She laid in bed, constantly reliving the day in her head.
Spike would have had a fit had he seen that
He wouldn't have stood for the smug comments either...
He...He knew how to treat a lady.
He wouldn't let such a thing happen...
He would have stood up for me...
Oh Spike I miss you so much...
Her thoughts kept her awake through most of the night, she dared not remove her necklace, it was the only comfort she could find at the moment. Crying quietly she finally found herself tired.
Her tears continued another half hour before subsiding, allowing her to drift off to sleep, thinking of her favorite helper, and perhaps the most chivalrous one in Ponyville.
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Authors note: Just a small little chapter, more to come but though I owed it to my readers to give them something extra before the big ones come.
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You never know how great something is until it's gone
Oh no he didn't! No one slaps dat flank.
931267
Oh yes he Di-ID!!
yeah, even though its filler, this chapter is important
I wonder what pony taste like hmmmm....
I do wish these were longer.
THAT PLOT.
Belongs to Spike and I dont think its smart to piss off a dragon.
931411
Actually rarity is a fine and independant mare. She is a STRONG white unicorn who don't need no man! allways wanted to do that...but yeah...rarity is independant, spike just so happens to be worthy of her
932916 can't fight with u on that buddy. U hit the nail on the head
Can't forget it goes both ways Spike got heart and Rarity is worthy of his good heart
933114 And she taught him how to find snacks XD
935408
Now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
you know... i like it
Poor rarity
So, Rarity gets a shitload of comments by misogynistic stallions, and one of them smacks her ass! Does that actually happen in real life? Especially at the market. Not the club, the market!
1011390
Yes at the market, plain and simple, she has been getting alot more attention with that necklace...and it will come back to bite that one dude in the ass...so to speak..XD
1011587
Yeah, but I'm saying it seems unrealistic.
1012735 How is it unrealistic? I work at a store and I see a lot more stuff than smacking asses and stuff.
1143347
...WHAT KIND OF STORE DO YOU WORK AT!?
If it were me, that would be all that it would take for me to throw that customer out on his ass!
Ha I wish, can't say the name because I would get fired. The store I work at is horrible and yes its a corporation dedicated to just making money, not worrying about others safety. They actually get 10,000 bucks if you die working there, isn't that stupid. Everyday I see robbery, vulgar actions (such as what happened to Rarity), and drug dealing. We are not allowed to stop them because we become the bad guys. My friend got written up for stopping some little brat from stealing a coke. She chased his ass out into the parking lot lol.Oh ya the people running the store decided that its cheaper to have no security guards so they fired them all. Hence why the drug trafficking has gotten a lot higher in the parking lot. If something bad happens I'm only allowed to ASK them to leave ...............oh ya that always works. I usually just get the finger and they go about there business.
FYI: The next chapter is being worked on...have been having computer issues...my apologies
What Rarity should have done after that comment is thrown the plate of cake at the culprit hard enough to draw blood, then stood over him and said:
"I've heard some rather despicable comments today, but that one..."
*puts on sunglasses*
"...takes the cake."
YEEEEAAAAHHHH!!
Rarity would never allow herself to be treated like that, and I doubt such a thing would happen in Ponyville, if it even happens in Equestria. Spike would come racing back if he knew that was happening.
MOAR !!!!!!!!!!!
1143445
Well, I would expect better at the Ponyville market.
DID ANOTHER AUTHOR DIE!?
Damn it! How many funerals do we need to have in a month?
1449103 Why would you say that?
1511253
I don't like it when people die. It's not complicated.
1511294 I don't think he is dead.
1512232
Oh, yeah? Then what's his excuse!?
1512502 Maybe he is getting his computer fixed.
1512881
That would take over three months?
I think so.
Well, I am not dead, I am quite alive... Just been working alot and have had no time to write. and my writing computer is still being fixed...I will resume Writing this story the moment I have free time... My apologies,
Rarity would have grabbed the pegasus by the wings with her magic, dragged him to the ground, gelded him with her teeth, gored him repeatedly with her horn, then hoofed over the quivering remains to Pinkie Pie for 'special ingredients'.
There is no way the canon Rarity would have let that go without severe punishment.
Wow, who knew Spike's simple actions meant that much to Rarity.
Hahahaha... but ouch