You know, I've been following the whole Fall of Equestria ever since Smudge Proof started the whole thing, and I must say, your story is quite well written. So far you're quite following the 'canon' set in this universe. You also have to put in that there will be purple collars, the ones who are completely broken.

For the rest, I don't have anything else to note, despite the fact that you'd said that this will be in the perspective from the caribou. Now I'm quite confused. Is this going to be written in Sunrise's point of view as she views the inner machinations of the caribou overlords, or is there going to be separate chapters detailing back stories of the caribou culture, IF there's anything to be written about that is?

4919478 The Purple collar doesn't exist yet in the story, but it soon will in a couple chapters.

As for the point of view, it's Sunny's eyes looking in, seeing how the Caribou operate and why. It'll be a little puzzle for the readers as she learns tidbits here and there. A puzzle of what happened. How did they lose their homeland? Who is Dainn? Why do they do this, etc etc etc.

Also, Non_Creepy_Nickname started it, Smudge was just the artist.

I was kind of hoping that Sunny would meet her mother. so, it looks like Vestri took ownership of the house. Since that's sun's mom's place if I remeber right does that mean he owns her as well?

4924108 The house is actually guest quarters. They have varying degrees of empty housing for ponies visiting, usually traders. Don't worry, she'll meet her mother soon enough.

4924156 Is the house owned by the township or is it part of an estate?

4924467 Township.

At this rate, I feel sorry for Sunny even more...

He chewed several times and swallowed, uttering, “It will do.” He paused afterward and stared down at his bracers, then back up at the other caribou. “Traces of magic?”

Wait, so caribou can taste magic?

“I see. You also removed your plug and masterbated without permission. I thought I could leave you alone until I retrieved you,”

Didn't Sunrise put the plug back in? How are they able to tell that she took it out and masturbated?

5227328 If you remember, the bracers were runed. Possibly a method of detecting magic. Sunrise left the plug in the bathroom, thinking she wouldn't need it. And she used a brush to masturbate, leaving herself obviously raw.

Interesting...

You know, Ventri is either intentionally setting her up or he's a dumbass. I'm personally leaning on the latter.

He punishes her for doing things he didn't forbid her to do and never once brought up. While I hate using this metaphor, it's like letting a dog sit on the couch for years and then beating the shit out of it for sitting on the couch one day. Again, horrible metaphor, but somewhat fitting considering how the Caribou view females.