Trying to find out why Coco Pommel decided to work fo Suri Polomare again Rarity learns about a underground pony trafficing ring. Problem is that the mare running it wants Rarity to join as either its newest member or its newest slave.
“We’ll detain her here for a while, so that you and Coco may go back to Suri’s home to get her things.” Schorl answered, her horn starting to glow as Rarity’ back was turned to her “It’s not exactly legal, but I care a lot about the submissives of the Society. As long as it keeps Coco safe, I’ll take the flack for it. Besides, sometimes you have to do something most would consider wrong to do what’s best for a pony.”
And Rarity get pushed into the idea of being okay with unwilling bondage. Although it seems risky giving someone so much control in the Society who know so little about how it works? I mean doesn't it undermine her authority when pretty much everyone but her knows that their slaves are unwilling? It makes her kind of a joke,
Now I'm not saying making Rarity a headmaster couldn't work, At the rate that Schorl is influencing her it seem Rarity would be okay with kidnapping and raping ponies into sex slaves in over a month or so. It seems like Schorl is betraying her by not being fully open and giving her a rule and activity book that has inflation omitted.
How I think this ending would have worked better is that if Schorl tells Rarity that she wants her to be Ponyville's headmanster, not give her the book of rules, but tell Rarity she needs a few months to take up some duties in the Society befor become a headmaster with the idea that Rarity would exposure to the more dubious activities bit by bit and Schorl effect her thinking. Next chapter, time skip and Rarity is running things in Ponyville.
“I would take her!” Rarity said assured, “She’d be better off with me than anypony else at the Society. I’d give her what she wanted, but won’t do it for my own pleasure like you do. She needs a mistress that can treat her properly, allow her to explore her kinks without leaving her bruised or covered in unsightly piercings.”
Rarity gasped, “You wouldn’t dare! There is no way she would agree to something like that.”
It seems there is a paragraph missing here with Suri's response.
this was quickly becoming my least favorite chapter. What happened to Coco was worse then anything that was done to Octavia for trying to escape but then to have Suri not even acknowledge her severe injury as more then a break in her work and a waste of blood soaked fabric was absolutely inhman or in-equine or whatever!
but OMG that ending.. good for Coco! Certainly better then any other slave has it. At least she will have some measure of happiness now.
and I really hope Suri's reeducation does not go smoothly for her.
YES!!! ITS FINALLY OUT!!
All right Rarity and all right Coco! Go oo!
Well I was gonna say throw Suri to the minotaurs but looks like I don't need to! it is delicious to see Suri finally get her punishment
And go Rarity! Go Coco! She's finally free from Suri!
And Rarity get pushed into the idea of being okay with unwilling bondage. Although it seems risky giving someone so much control in the Society who know so little about how it works? I mean doesn't it undermine her authority when pretty much everyone but her knows that their slaves are unwilling? It makes her kind of a joke,
Now I'm not saying making Rarity a headmaster couldn't work, At the rate that Schorl is influencing her it seem Rarity would be okay with kidnapping and raping ponies into sex slaves in over a month or so. It seems like Schorl is betraying her by not being fully open and giving her a rule and activity book that has inflation omitted.
How I think this ending would have worked better is that if Schorl tells Rarity that she wants her to be Ponyville's headmanster, not give her the book of rules, but tell Rarity she needs a few months to take up some duties in the Society befor become a headmaster with the idea that Rarity would exposure to the more dubious activities bit by bit and Schorl effect her thinking. Next chapter, time skip and Rarity is running things in Ponyville.
“I would take her!” Rarity said assured, “She’d be better off with me than anypony else at the Society. I’d give her what she wanted, but won’t do it for my own pleasure like you do. She needs a mistress that can treat her properly, allow her to explore her kinks without leaving her bruised or covered in unsightly piercings.”
Rarity gasped, “You wouldn’t dare! There is no way she would agree to something like that.”
It seems there is a paragraph missing here with Suri's response.
mother of
please tell me breeding is against the rules!
I take it all back.. Schorl is FUCKING GENIUS!
this was quickly becoming my least favorite chapter. What happened to Coco was worse then anything that was done to Octavia for trying to escape but then to have Suri not even acknowledge her severe injury as more then a break in her work and a waste of blood soaked fabric was absolutely inhman or in-equine or whatever!
but OMG that ending.. good for Coco! Certainly better then any other slave has it. At least she will have some measure of happiness now.
and I really hope Suri's reeducation does not go smoothly for her.