Trying to find out why Coco Pommel decided to work fo Suri Polomare again Rarity learns about a underground pony trafficing ring. Problem is that the mare running it wants Rarity to join as either its newest member or its newest slave.
4866773 Thanks for the catch. Honestly I wish more people would help to correct errors in my story. I must admit I'm not the best typist and even though I run my stories through a spell checker and have an editor sometime things slip through. Though next time perhaps sending me a PM would be better.
4866821 Sorry, just caught that and thought you would like to know. By the way, I submitted an OC a few months ago. Any chance she might be appearing soon? Her name is my username, Silver Reader.
I have to say you're doing a good job keeping us guessing. From your writing I can't determine where Rarity will fall. This will truely be the first time she sees and reacts to things like this. If Lady Tourmaline keeps up her niceities while she explains things to Rarity (and allows Coco to tell her how much she enjoys being submissive) we may see a dom from her yet.
4870599 Did you submit an OC? I don't have a record of that I am afraid. Might of lost it or perhaps there was a site error. Would you like for me to resend the form for you?
While I do like having a roster of possible background ponies to use I have to find a good place to include them. I honestly have a few dozens slave and master OCs that I still haven't used for one reason or another, usually because I just haven't found a place to insert them at the moment. In time I should get most of them, but patience is required and one shouldn't expect their OC to appear just because they offered them for use.
I'm curious just how Fancy Pants passed his initiation. He seems far to gentle a soul and kind a master to have impressed the members of the society. Perhaps his position, his wealth, and his wife prevented him from needing to undergo such barbarism.
This is gonna be good
Isaac:...oh how I wish I could get her out of here....no matter what, master or slave, once you walk through those doors...you never leave
Cliff hanger?!
What?
4866773
Thanks for the catch. Honestly I wish more people would help to correct errors in my story. I must admit I'm not the best typist and even though I run my stories through a spell checker and have an editor sometime things slip through. Though next time perhaps sending me a PM would be better.
4866821 Sorry, just caught that and thought you would like to know. By the way, I submitted an OC a few months ago. Any chance she might be appearing soon? Her name is my username, Silver Reader.
I have to say you're doing a good job keeping us guessing. From your writing I can't determine where Rarity will fall. This will truely be the first time she sees and reacts to things like this. If Lady Tourmaline keeps up her niceities while she explains things to Rarity (and allows Coco to tell her how much she enjoys being submissive) we may see a dom from her yet.
4870599
Did you submit an OC? I don't have a record of that I am afraid. Might of lost it or perhaps there was a site error. Would you like for me to resend the form for you?
While I do like having a roster of possible background ponies to use I have to find a good place to include them. I honestly have a few dozens slave and master OCs that I still haven't used for one reason or another, usually because I just haven't found a place to insert them at the moment. In time I should get most of them, but patience is required and one shouldn't expect their OC to appear just because they offered them for use.
4878577 Sure, I was wondering if you somehow lost my form. It's fine, though, I'm pretty patient.
I'm curious just how Fancy Pants passed his initiation. He seems far to gentle a soul and kind a master to have impressed the members of the society. Perhaps his position, his wealth, and his wife prevented him from needing to undergo such barbarism.
God fucking dammit Rarity...
4958500 when in doubt get your freinds ALL WAYS GET YOUR FREINDS!
She put a horse's head in my bed.
Rarity hits the ground after fainting.
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Hey, I wanted to thank you for taking interest in my stories lately. I know they aren't perfect, but I hope they are at least enjoyable