Right in the feels...

Found some things you may want to edit.

She spoke in a different tone, with a different feeling, that was also present in the parkle in her eyes.

She keeps stroking her abdome, and silence reings over you once more.

Ms. Harshwhinny startS, but you stop her before she continued.

Damn, the feels in this chapter were amplified by the fact that I had some sombre music playing in the background of my Minecraft tab.

best chapter of the story. damn feels.

Sex and feels. Stories like this are becoming a norm.
And I love it!
Great job!

If he wasn't a pegasus, those last three sentences would have been very dark.

I enjoyed this story immensely.