Photo Finish helps Coco Pommel take full advantage of the decadent Canterlot lifestyle while she works for her (specifically a weight-gain story)
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Man, I just love the character interactions in this story. The way you write Photo Finish just makes it so enticing to read. Her interactions with Pins are always great to read, haha. There was some nice gain in this one, too. From how much Coco gained in weight in the previous chapters, this one came as a surprise, heh.
Though, I'm kinda curious as to what the numbers in the brackets meant:
Is it like, something left over from the editing process? o:
I loved the update! All the characters have so much depth for a fetish fic, great job!
7560651 Yes, that was left over from editing. It has since been taken out. Thank you very much for catching that, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! The characterization and tension has been something I've been focusing very much on, and I'm glad that you've noticed that. I hope to continue pleasing!
7561211 Your loyalty is much appreciated. I hope that I can continue pleasing you!
The story so far is really interesting and fun to read! I am hoping to see more in the near future.
You know, I don't normally go for the whole romance and cloppy stories, but between the title and the short desc, I was curious.
I'm glad I am curious since this has some of the most authentic intrapersonal dynamics I've read so far. Added with the personalities and situations, this is a truly interesting story on its own... even without the naughtiness leaking in through the cracks.
Well done. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
7569668 Thank you very much! The intrapersonal dynamics and interactions are something that I've been focusing mainly on throughout this entire story. I'll see if I can get this in one of your notable libraries.
7570472 Please don't let this be dead. I'm really enjoying it.
8114769 Not dead. I've just been stuck on a paragraph for a few days now, sad as it is to say.
8115260 Is there anyway I could help?
Was stuck at that first paragraph, am trying something out to move it along (everything after the first paragraph). I think the most help I can get at the moment is checking up on me tomorrow, to make sure I'm on my way. I'd like to get this done before next Saturday/ [I already have a rough draft of this chapter done; I just need to iron it out, which is a bit rough] Other than that, I don't think so, but thank you for offering. I will let you know if there's anything else.
.... It's funny. I got into this story for the same reason Photo got into those magazines. And yet I found myself entranced suddenly by story with a bit of a lewd edge... I'm almost tempted to read this during the day.
EDIT: NOT, to mention I've actually commented on a clopfic! YOU DON'T DO THAT WITH YOUR REAL ACCOUNT!