Photo Finish helps Coco Pommel take full advantage of the decadent Canterlot lifestyle while she works for her (specifically a weight-gain story)
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Challenging or no, I thought this chapter was great! Felt like a really natural continuation. Fanny showing up like that out of the blue is a touch contrived, but given the nature of the fic that is easily forgiven. It certainly advances things in an...appealing manner
Take your time with your updates. I would much rather you work at your own pace to produce good stuff (and not burn out) than crank out a bunch of sub-par chapters fast and then not finish. There's a simply dreadful amount of unfinished stories about, would be a shame to add to the pile.
Keep it up!!
7239937 Aye, and I salvaged Chapter 4 from their clutches. I'll have to rest and recharge, but it is up.
I'll be safer writing Chapter 5.
BTW: Do you have any thoughts on the story? If so, I'd like to hear them.
I loved this chapter! I honestly didn't expect you to bring in fanny pancake. Can't wait to see a continuation of this!
7399002 It's about time someone got that reference.
Keep doing what you do.
I remember when this first came out I never thought it would be continued, and now here it is with three more chapters. Slower weight gain is such a rarity and a delight when I come across it. I can't wait to see how far this goes, not just weight weight but how Finish will deal with her urges as they are sure to grow along with Coco.
7402003 I consider that an honor, coming from whom I presume to be the king of inflation stories.
7411070 I don't know how far this will go, but I've got a good amount on this next update.
7412721 If you ever needed help in anyway I would be more than willing to help.