Photo Finish helps Coco Pommel take full advantage of the decadent Canterlot lifestyle while she works for her (specifically a weight-gain story)
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Wow glad this was updated!
What a pleasant surprise! I'm glad you got through the roadblock, even if this didn't quite turn out how you wanted it to. However, I think that in the interests of a good story, sacrificing some fat stuff for the sake of the plot was a worthwhile move. I should note as well that there were several grammatical errors throughout the story, but it's not that bad. Idk. Thanks anyways!
OH YES AN UPDATE
Don't even fret yourself about the content, this chapter was great! I really liked how you handled the interactions between Finish, Coco, and Pins, felt very familiar. Can't wait until the eating begins in earnest hehe. Remember, half the fun of weight gain comes from overeating!
Right there with you, brother. Stories are tough to create and tougher to keep going. I'm glad you finally updated; none of it felt disappointing. Teasing, definitely, but not disappointing.
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I was not expecting so many comments after such a long hiatus! Thank you for the support, and I'm glad I could entertain with this chapter. I have plans for the next chapter to be a touch saucier, and should I stay with my current schedule, it should be coming out on the 20th.
As for the grammar mistakes, I thought I had caught them all when I went through Word, but I guess I was wrong. I'll have to go through it and see if I can't spot them and eradicate them.
7126066 The longer the hiatus, the more noteworthy the return!
"Also, Just_A_Nopony, my anime-obsessed brother made me watch Death Note. Now everything makes sense."
- I know right? Late I know but that madd me chuckle a bit
How does one glare with WIDE eyes? Generally that's shock or surprise.
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That's a good question! I'll go and fix that. To be honest, "wide wide eyes" and "eyes wide" are crutch phrases I use to advance the story, and ones I need to stop overusing.