Photo Finish helps Coco Pommel take full advantage of the decadent Canterlot lifestyle while she works for her (specifically a weight-gain story)
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"Plat" instead of plate and "Unchecks" instead of unchecked were the only mistakes I could find.
And eeeee! This is cute!
ANOTHER character??? Who could it be?
7156633 Word failed me this time, it seemed! Actually, it was just me not being sharp enough on that. Thank you for catching that, those errors have been fixed. Glad I delivered for you this time around.
7156846 I could tell you... actually, yes, I could tell you. If you'd like. But that would ruin the surprise. Still if you want to know, let me know.
And if I may ask, what did you think of this chapter?
7157451 I'm liking it so far, but holy damn is Finish hell bent on making this happen xD
YESSSSSSS
Simply delightful. Let there be more, I say! More characters, more chapters, more eating! More is always good, ja?
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As far as the chapter itself, I'd say that Finish is becoming mire of a bully to Coco. That and her blatant fetishizing of her new recruit is in danger of being found out. I mean seriously, it's beginning to look like Fancypants and Fleur are starting to analyze the relationship between the two and are slowly realizing how much of a total creep Photo Finish is.
I can't wait to see how that will develop, though I'm absolutely certain this will blow up in Photo's face.
This chapter was perfect! I think you characterized fleur perfectly and I love the overeating scenes. If I may ask, when should we expect the next chapter of this splendorous story?
7223604 Tomorrow, if all goes well.
7223674 Wow, that's great! Thanks for getting back to me so quickly. I had a boring day imagined for tomorrow but it just got 100% better!
7225015 Things did not go as planned. I will try and get it up as soon as I can.
7228416 oh it's fine, I understand
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This is a great phrase because I'm now imagining your pony avatar fighting off a horde of giant, undead rats with a lumberjack axe and a mana cannon, while they try to steal your keyboard and phone.
Wow. Photo Finish has quite an imagination; her fantasy scene was hot as hell.
Wow. I feel like i was dreaming for a moment as well. Well done.