Photo Finish helps Coco Pommel take full advantage of the decadent Canterlot lifestyle while she works for her (specifically a weight-gain story)
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WHYYYYYYYYYYY *sob*
It just keeps getting better and better. Just when we think it's gonna work out things get ever murkier. What could possibly transpire next?? Can't wait to find out!!
Great chapter! I always look forward towards this story updating. Poor Photo Finish she just cant catch a break. I really hope everything works out for her and Coco.
This is one of those stories where clear communication would shorten the run time by at least half.
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I apologize. I had thought that I had established this conflict with enough pitfalls where communicating wouldn't be enough; it appears that's not the case.
I'll practice proper conflict-establishing from here on, and in the next story I write.
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Credit where its due, I legitimately can’t tell if this response was meant to be sarcastic. My compliments.
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No sarcasm intended. I know I have a lot of improvement to do, and thank you for pointing it out.
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It wasn’t exactly meant as a criticism. Mostly just an observation that many of life’s problems are heavily tied to a lack of appropriate communication. Wether due to people thinking that they have been perfectly clear when their intentions were obtuse enough to be misunderstood, or people who are just unwilling to clarify due to nerves or similar.
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Ah. I misunderstood, then. I thank you for reading up to this point.
Now I’m curious exactly what faux pas Photo Finish committed here.
I think Fanny and photo finish are both I love with coco and are going to fight over her, due to the way fanny was acting toward finish when finish encouraged coco and her overall general behavior toward finish when she interacts with coco . That is just my prediction of what could transpire.