Interesting, but I don't know if I will be able to get into it...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Shetlock

You goofed up the horizontal rule in the description. Please fix it.

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I did indeed goof.

Wow... That was disturbing.

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It's meant to be, so i'm glad that it worked for you. To be honest, it was hard to resist putting in some bad puns to lighten it a bit, but I didn't want to ge ahead of myself.

4659739 With how you write I think we crossed a very, very blurry line a long time ago. You have nothing to fear now. Go forth into the unknown.

This is far, far better than I expected. Bravo!

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I dread to think about what you were expecting...

4664048 I thought it would be decent, but it ended up being really good, definitely has me eagerly awaiting another chapter.

Quite good. I thought these guys were undercover agents, but considering what the ISA sent them I'm assuming they're fugitives.
Doing well enough so far. Looking forward to future chapter whenever they come.

4664059 dito i can't wait for the next chapter.

Mother of fuck, this was intense.

This seems to be a more mundane version of Call of Cthulhu blended with a noir detective work. I'm anxious for more.

Oh shit, I thought this was from a different 'verse until I saw the 'Innsberg Sorting Accountants', And then I knew they were screwed.

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Oh they are indeed screwed. Even more than you probably think...

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I think that they're gonna be really screwed. Like, so screwed that everyone reading is gonna need rectal surgery from all the screwing.

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I dunno, some random one that he made up, or a crossover of some sort?

Hmm, so far this is pretty much what I expected. Good writing as usual, but I'm still iffy about if I'll like the plot.

Oh, and let me guess; Nigel's the killer, right? Either him or one of his buds in the UIP I bet. Seems like something you'd do. Let's see if I am correct. Onwards to the next chapter!

It wasn’t that heavy, and whoever had packed it must have been careless as he could hear the contents rolling around. “There was no sign of who delivered this box?”

Simon plunged it into the box, cutting through the tape holding the flaps together. He opened it up, the human staring into the box silently.

“Detective,” he asked after a long moment, his voice flat. “Who delivered this box?” Shetlock checked his notepad for the name that the Innkeeper had told him.

Yesp. Totally called it.

How...strange? I wonder if it's a changeling trying to kill them.
Faust knows Dropbear has a thing for changelings.

7952981 Nah, more likely the UIP

"Getting Away With Murder" by Papa Roach.