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The thick plottens!
ok, crazy Lament configuration being from Helraiser (the movies) is infectious
Awwww, poor Flutters, she's just a mess of emotions right now.
this chapter was interesting. so it seems he doesnt have nightmares but how did they get out? or how did fluttershy get them? i like how you worded it, by making fluttershy not even know if it was indeed real or part of her delusion. seems danny's allfiction transfered over to her or something. i must admit the pacing of the story is kinda confusiong with the whole 3 days later, to a month, then days, and finally minutes! hard to keep track sometimes of how much time has transpired between events.
one more thing sometimes i feel like the story is heading to a bit more grim path than the tags suggest. i feel like the story is walking a thin line before it falls into a dark or gore tag.
5076600 Noted!
Have added the 'Dark' tag, as it does indeed fit better with the current set of events. Especially the recollections of his nightmares, and the more.. implicating bit with falling.
Sorry for so little activity, to you and anyone else who reads this. I have been busy with work and among other personal matters, though this weekend I had free, I watched over my godparent's home as they were out of town.
Just to say, if anyone notices the views are already present despite a chapter only been up for a minute or two (such as upon submission, already 6-8 views automatically), that's most likely the views that are compiled when I edit and add on bits. On a particularly badly-timed set of events, I had a chapter count up to 16. :I
Honestly.. as soon as i noticed i couldn't press the -> button.. i was mortified
I cannot wait for the next part of the story!
I'm not sure if the horror in his mind got out.. or if now fluttershy is also seeing it.. but I really do hope to see this defeated..
Everyone's had to deal with their inner 'demons'.. but in a world of magic.. I'm worried for how potentially dangerous this 'demon' could be
I feel so sorry for Fluttershy.. but in a way.. I'm glad that someone else can see it too.. he's not alone now
So this is what happens when MLP is mixed with a psychological horror/thriller movie. It's hard to tell if they're just crazy or haunted.