A human named Daniel has arrived in Equestria: months since his arrival, he has time to think over his past experiences thus far. As well as ponder about his odd friend Fluttershy when she decides to visit.
This had my curiosity, but now it has my attention.
I thought it was good. You mixed up affect with effect at one point. Carry on.
Two questions:
1. Why can't he eat meat?2. Why is Fluttershy stuttering?
wow im liking the first chapter so far
This had my curiosity, but now it has my attention.
I thought it was good. You mixed up affect with effect at one point. Carry on.
Two questions:
1. Why can't he eat meat?
2. Why is Fluttershy stuttering?
wow im liking the first chapter so far