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seems like something to read.
Awesome update. I am looooving this story!
Also, 'Stabletech' is spelled 'Stable-Tec', unless you purposely put it that way for a reason.
After reading a few chapters, I gotta say. I like this story, I like the setting, the premise of it, I even laughed at the Frosty Winds cameo. Keep it up
Woop! More great story and more character development. I may have missed something but that "romance" came out of left field. I didn't think they were serious, more like flirty friends.
4939626 Thanks, we've since fixed it.
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Thanks, totally blanked on that one before being reminded. As 4945245 said, that got hotfixed.
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Always glad to see a new face. Hope it continues to deliver as we go forward.
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I've been tossing hints at their relationship, this was one of the more... obvious indicators of where they're at. I kinda wanted to solidify where exactly they were at just in case anything was up in the air in that regard (though that wasn't the only reason for the scene, it's the most pertinent one to the relationship).
I'm rather fond of stable relationships, and often I've seen people attest that they are comparatively boring from the perspective of a story's natural progression. I'd like to put that to the test, such as I am able.
4945855 Coldfixed*
So glad I'm in a nice, metal tank... Wait... Eh, there's no wind chill.
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Did you just... was that a Last Sentinel pun?
4945855 I just took the hints as flirting, maybe a unacted upon crush but now I definitely know where they stand. It'll be interesting to see how their relationship continues under the gloomy sky of the wasteland.
4946476 Yeah... Let's go with that! Subconscious puns are still puns. Or maybe cameos? Hmm... Oh look,
a distractionsomepony licked a metal pole!Uh, this might be a nit-pick here, but I was under the impression that the Everfree stable (That was titled 101) was the last one constructed? I might be wrong though.
Anyway, really great chapter, thanks for the updates
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Hmm... I will get back to you on that one.
Glad I've kept your interest. I'm hoping to keep up the current update pace for another two to three chapters, then maybe have a bit of a break... Not a hiatus, more like an intermission, I suppose.
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Stable 101 was, on the stable tec mainframe, the last stable listed as completed. But that doesn't mean that there weren't any more. If you were constructing a stable and the world ended, you'll damn well want to stay if it's remotely near completion. And there's all sorts of other stable-like places, secret stables, copied stables, and such in various headcanons.
There's no reason stable tec wouldn't have been contracted for military shelters and other private works (such as a corporate stable). Private shelters wouldn't be listed with the 'Public' ones, after all. If I bought a stable, I wouldn't want anyone else to know, and I'd pick a number to plaster everywhere; simply because a listing of "Clear Skies Manufacturing Stable" on any scrap of paper would be a potential giveaway to the location, while "Stable 187" could be anywhere. As for military bunkers, "Missile Shelter no. 7" or "Supplies & Weaponry Depot no. 3" is a bit of a clue as to if it's your secret instillation or a typical, easy to ignore shelter.
Or only stables who had all their passes sold were listed as complete, which is also possible.
4963411 I guess that would make sense, but in FoE its mentioned that in Manehatton there's a corporation of traitors, and hidden underneath their base is a bunker, that would have been simply labeled as a "Bunker".
Besides, in the games, Vaults are said to take around seven years to complete, sometimes more, sometimes less. They all cost a massive sum of money to complete though, and thus were limited to 120 or so Vaults.
I think it would be safe to say that in FoE the CMC got as many bits as possible, so I wouldn't expect there to be that many contracted, or "completed" Stables. Mislabeling I can understand, but Stable barding on this pony in particular implies he is from a Stable as well.
Anyway, I actually enjoyed you're headcanon. I generally lose my suspension of disbelief when I see some Stables labeled ridiculously high (700 Stables? I wouldn't think so, even with everything you just said. )but it should be more tolerant. Always good to hear others headcanons, so thanks for sharing!
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Honestly I'd originally missed that detail, but 4963411 is perfectly in line with how I'd see things being, I don't really have anything to add on that account. The number in and of itself is ultimately rather inconsequential, all things considered.
4966388 I wouldn't worry about it too much in this case, mostly it just takes my attention off a story, but generally when the Stable is number Seven hundred and fifty eight or something along those lines.
It doesn't really matter too much here though. Thanks for taking the time to confirm and all though.
This is a great story you wrote here. Also, finally! Someone who realizes that y'all is plural! Sorry to nit-pick, but as someone from the south, it always bugged me when some one used y'all as a replacement for "you" instead of "you all", and this is the first story in this fandom I've read which doesn't make that mistake!
No map? IF ONLY THEY HAD A PIPBUCK!
WHOAHOOAH!
https://m.Hey, sorry for how long it took for me to finally finish this chapter.
I honestly enjoyed this chapter. I liked how much this chapter hints at the character arc of Snap slowly coming to realize that the Enclave are fucking monsters who have lied to her and most likely have sent them down in the middle of nowhere to die and be used as propaganda for why the surface is bad. The Clavers have probably already begun making the posters honoring their 'sacrifice'.
Grace changing her opinion of Snap came a bit too fast, but otherwise it was alright. Bernard gets to reveal more about his backstory and I feel hyped for the 'Serpent'. Tailwind finally got to show more of her personality. I found her being disappointed about a terminal already being logged in to be cute.
I also found this paragraph for Tail to be ironic.
I can see she's going to take awhile before reality seeps in.
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Forgot to also add that I found the terminal logs to be pointless filler, but otherwise it didn't bother me too much.