As dawn broke over the happy little town of Ponyville, there was already activity going on in the bedroom of Sugarcube Corner, where Pinkie Pie was sleeping happily with her two daughters, Melody Smith, who Pinkie and her friends rescued from a cruel orphanage that was now put in the kind hands of Shade Goodrivers, and Clover Harver, a runaway princess who didn't like being a princess because of her parents harsh actions. As sunlight peeked through the window of Pinkies room, the party pony began to stir in her sleep. Blinking her eyes open, she looked down to see her angel food cakes nestled up to her with warm smiles on their faces. My sweet little babies, Pinkie thought to herself. Then, leaning down, she gently nuzzled their cheeks, "Melody, Clover, it's time to wake up pumpkins," she said in a soft tone. Hearing their mothers voice, Melody and Clover began to stir in their sleep. Blinking their eyes open, they looked up to see their new Mommy. "Good Morning my sweet angel cakes!" Pinkie said smiling at them.
With a cute little yawn, they smiled back at their Mommy, "Good Morning Mommy!" they said in unison. Pinkies heart melted at how cute they were.
"How about we go and get breakfast? I can make the same cinnamon oatmeal I made for you yesterday, if you want some that is," Pinkie said before helping the two girls onto the floor.
"Ok Mommy, that would be nice!" Melody said with her sweet tone.
"Yes Mommy, we would love to have oatmeal!" Clover said smiling up to her mother.
"GREAT! Let's head downstairs and I can get your oatmeal started!" Pinkie said leading her daughters out of the room and downstairs. When they got to the parlor, they saw their friends and three new fillies. "Hey girls! What's up?" Pinkie asked hopping over to her friends.
"Well, Applebloom, Big Mac and Granny were all wondering where we had all gone too, so ah told them, and Applebloom wanted to come with me to meet the little sweethearts," Applejack said looking at her little sister.
"YEAH! And y'all were right Applejack, they are sweet!" Applebloom said, looking at the two human girls.
"OH! Before I forget, here you sweethearts go," Rarity said before levitating a bundle of clothes over to the two girls, who carefully took a hold of them.
"Thank you for washing them Auntie Rarity!" Melody and Clover said in unison.
Rarity's heart melted at how they said it in unison. "Aww, you're welcome, my sweet angels of nieces," Rarity said with a blushing smile and turned to her sister. "And girls, this is my little sister, Sweetie Belle. Sweetie Belle, these two angels are Melody *motions to Melody*, and Clover *motions to Clover*." Rarity said introducing her sister to the two girls.
Sweetie Belle walked up to Melody and Clover to get a better look at them. "Aww, you two are just as cute as Rarity described you as!" she said wit a blush and a spark coming from her horn.
"It's nice to meet you Sweetie Belle," Melody said, smiling back to the unicorn filly.
"Howdy Melody and Clover, mah name is Applebloom, it's nice to meet you both," Applebloom said walking up to the two girls.
"It's nice to meet you too, Applebloom," Clover said smiling at the yellow earth filly.
"Hey, don't forget me!" They heard the voice of Scootaloo, who was fluttering her wings over to see the two girls. "My name is Scootaloo, it's nice to meet you both," she said smiling at the two girls. "And together, we make..." she started, looking at her friends.
"THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS!" the three called loudly, causing Melody and Clover to cover their ears.
"Must you three be so loud?" Rarity asked with a faint giggle.
"What's the Cutie Mark Crusaders?" Melody asked.
"We're a society seeking to help any fillies and colts find their special talents, which are displayed as pictures on their flanks, called cutie marks." Sweetie Belle explained.
"Is that what those pictures on everyone's flank called?" Clover asked, to which the ponies nodded.
"Well, while you two get to know these fillies, I'll go and make your oatmeal," Pinkie told her daughters, to which they nodded. "Ok, I will be back in momentarily." and with that, Pinkie bounced happily into the kitchen to get started on her daughters oatmeal.
"Girls, if you two want, we can take you around Ponyville and get you better acquainted with your surroundings," Twilight said to her nieces.
"Ok Auntie Twilight, that would be nice," Melody said with Clover nodding in agreement. After a while, Pinkie walked in with two bowls of oatmeal on her back.
"Here you go my precious princesses, but be careful, they're still warm," Pinkie said to her daughters, who carefully took the bowls and the spoons from their mother. And as soon as they had the spoons, they began to eat their oatmeal.
"Mm, it's very good Mommy, just like you made it yesterday!" Melody said to Pinkie, with Clover nodding in agreement.
"Aww, I'm glad you love it sweeties," Pinkie said with a squee. After a few good bites, they had finished the oatmeal. "Here, why don't I take your bowls, while you two go and get dressed?" Pinkie said to the two girls, to which, they nodded and walked to the bathroom to change, and wash up, before being stopped by Twilight.
"Wait girls, I picked these up for you before coming over," Twilight said, before levitating two cosmetic bags over to the two human girls. "Just a few bathroom supplies you two may need, includes a toothbrush, toothpaste, soap, shampoo, and some other things you'll need for the bathroom," she explained to her nieces.
"Thank you Auntie Twilight, we love you!" they said in unison.
"Aww, I love you both too!" Twilight said with a blush. And with that, two girls left for the bathroom.
"They look just so sweet, it's hard to believe anypony would want to be mean to them," Sweetie Belle commented, with the other two crusaders nodding in agreement.
"Well, we won't ever have to worry about those ghastly orphanage 'caregivers' anymore, especially if Shade said he would keep watch of it," Rarity stated with a flick of her mane.
"Who's Shade?" Scootaloo asked with curiosity.
"He was a samurai that helped us uncover those awful orphanage staff members," Fluttershy said, looking at the orange and fuchsia filly.
"Uh, what's a samurai?" Applebloom asked.
"Samurai, an elite warrior who will fight with honor on the battlefield, and will help those in need," Twilight explained.
"He slashed through some chains the old head of the orphanage used to try and take Melody by force," Rainbow added to Shades description.
"Whoa! He sounds cool," Scootaloo commented.
"His actions made it clear that he is cool," Twilight explained to the Pegasus filly.
"Ok, we're ready!" they all turned to see Melody and Clover all dressed up in their new dresses. Melody's was an emerald green dress, and matching green shoes, and Clover was wearing a summer red dress, with a clover pattern on it.
"Aww, you two look so cute, I can just eat you up!" Rarity said with a blushing smile. The two girls blushed at being called cute.
"Well, if everypony's ready, lets go and see the town!" Pinkie said, appearing at the door out of nowhere. And with that, the group all left, and began the tour.
i love this story a lot more now because Pinkie Pie is now a mother of her two newly adopted human daughters that make story a lot more cuter then it was before great job on this chapter and is Melody and Clover going to be start calling each other sisters now at some point in the chapters to come out for this story
I hope the girls meet most of the ponies, but I have a funny feeling that they will be confronted by those snobs.
4669464 They will, but like in most stories, they'll change their ways
4669472 are you going to reply to my first comment i put on this chapter
4669479 I already did
4669502 i do not see that you reply to my first comment i put on this chapter that say this i love this story a lot more now because Pinkie Pie is now a mother of her two newly adopted human daughters that make story a lot more cuter then it was before great job on this chapter and is Melody and Clover going to be start calling each other sisters now at some point in the chapters to come out for this story and please reply to my first comment i put on this chapter or to this comment when you are online again
4669502 please
4668905 I can guarantee that they'll be calling each other sisters very soon
4669611 ok and what chapter will that be until they'll be calling each other sisters
4669626 In a little bit, and maybe in the next chapter, and have a look at the crossover, and you'll see that the second chapter got an edit
4669791 ok and i can see the second chapter got an edit for your crossover i like it
First I gotta say I love this story, but I do have a question. Are you going to develop Clover's character more as the story goes on? Because right now it seems like she's just there. For the record this is not criticism, I was just wondering.
4672435 Yeah, and as you can see by the tags, you can guess who her love interest will be
darkmage1997 i got a question when will the next chapter come out for this story
4674729 Soon
4674802 ok and can you tell me how soon it will be until the next chapter is out
4674814 Until I can find a good idea
4675287 ok and i hope you find a good idea for the next chapter soon
4675302 I will, trust me
4675316 ok
cute
I think if I smile any harder I will rip my face in half
i don´t know, maybe they should stop to say always cute ans something like that, make it a bit rare. I don´t say that it is bad, but i think perhaps you should use different words or just make it rare. It doesn´t look that good after a while if the whole story is goes always like "sweet,cute, awwww,sweet,aawwww,awwww,cute)
I mean it more like.....let them earn their aawww moments, let them do something first, not just standing there and...awww.
I am a bit bad with my english, not always the right words at hand, but i try to describe it honestly and nice.
.....i think what i try to say with other words would mean,....you overused the some words. And maybe the character from one of the girls...Clover i think, should be more quiet, just a bit different. I would really prefer it if she goes in the opposite direction with her character than Melody does.
.....i am not happy with my grammar right now....melody (speak much/happy...little sunshine).......Clover (speak less/ hap...more like Maud maybe.....like the wind) if you understand this, i think i would like it like these, or just similar
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I agree. They're getting way too much attention.
But... you can't eat them up, Rarity, for they can't fit into your mouth . Perhaps, using "might" instead of "can" is an alternative?