4589941 There is not. I thought about doing a prequel, but what happened in the year before this is not what I wanted to focus on, but what happens now. Sorry.
4589954 But you might want to include what happened to get them stuck there and why they are there in the first place (specifically). It helps to maintain the suspension of disbelief. Even a handwave explanation would work.
4594010 Maybe include it in dialogue or in thought pretexts (someone thinking to themselves). Personally, I find stuff flows easier that way. Of course, that may be just me.
4594033 I understand, and I realized that there is one last thing I want to do concerning the first day of this story (Expect a lot of events to be like that, event name: Chapter part.) I just need to decide where it would fit best.
Interesing.
4582894 Good. Now get over here. Everyone gets one, right?
Well, this is interesting...
Was there a story before this? It seems to be kind of an abrupt start.
4589941 There is not. I thought about doing a prequel, but what happened in the year before this is not what I wanted to focus on, but what happens now. Sorry.
4589954 But you might want to include what happened to get them stuck there and why they are there in the first place (specifically). It helps to maintain the suspension of disbelief. Even a handwave explanation would work.
4593356 I suppose I can see what I can do at the end of the second chapter as far as that goes. That or the third.
4594010 Maybe include it in dialogue or in thought pretexts (someone thinking to themselves). Personally, I find stuff flows easier that way. Of course, that may be just me.
4594033 I understand, and I realized that there is one last thing I want to do concerning the first day of this story (Expect a lot of events to be like that, event name: Chapter part.) I just need to decide where it would fit best.
Nice. I like the premise and your writing style. Faved and upvoted.