4618227 Hehe, just wait. You might see Mark's role better soon. Chapter 3 will hopefully come later this week seeing as I had a burst of productivity today. I leave no promises as to constant progress, but thank you for showing so much interest in my story.
This chapter was great. I enjoyed how Nathaniel managed to converse with the girls. I cant wait for the next chapter.
4617162 Woot! Likability achieved! Now lets see if I can do the opposite in the next chapter.
I put this in my favorites so i can look every day, please, PLEASE update frequently.
4617667 I will try, but I have been having terrible writer's block recently. That and just being overall distracted.
4617697 aw, please when you can, i don't feel like Mark has the most respect for fluttershy, i think this is where the dark tag plays in.
4618227 Hehe, just wait. You might see Mark's role better soon. Chapter 3 will hopefully come later this week seeing as I had a burst of productivity today. I leave no promises as to constant progress, but thank you for showing so much interest in my story.