Mark is shown to be quite the manipulator and it seems he's fit enough to stand up to AJ. He seems like a competent antagonist. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
Just curious, how often do you think you will be updating this? Really enjoying it so far, probably one of my favourite ongoing fics right now so I'm rather curious
4637506 I have no idea. I will probably make a schedule for myself once I start working on other stories as well, but at the moment I am focusing on this, so you get the chapters as I finish them.
4639421 I smacked myself for this. I meant to only add them to each group as each of the mane 6 had their ow chapter or not add them at all. I think at this point I will be taking it out of there, and am sorry for misleading you.
4620198 Mark should be happy my OC (the picture) Isn't a human in that world, would Bass have heard that Mark had so much as touched Fluttershy the wrong way......Mark would end up mysteriously "missing"
That Mark is a dick. That creep needs to get beat up, big time. NO MERCY on his evil soul.
Mark is shown to be quite the manipulator and it seems he's fit enough to stand up to AJ. He seems like a competent antagonist. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
4637085 Wow, This is nothing compared to what he will do. Just you wait.
4637236 There's more!!!!!!!!
4637287 Of course, even though it seems like people are hating this chapter. Weird.
Just curious, how often do you think you will be updating this? Really enjoying it so far, probably one of my favourite ongoing fics right now so I'm rather curious
I'm out. I can see where this is going and sorry, but I hate blackmail/forced "servitude" stories, good luck
4637506 I have no idea. I will probably make a schedule for myself once I start working on other stories as well, but at the moment I am focusing on this, so you get the chapters as I finish them.
Well, if it wasn't clear before it is now. Fillies and gentlecolts, we have our antagonist.
4637327 I can see why
Why is this in the Rainbow Dash group? Its been bugging me for a while now.
4639421 I smacked myself for this. I meant to only add them to each group as each of the mane 6 had their ow chapter or not add them at all. I think at this point I will be taking it out of there, and am sorry for misleading you.
4620198 Mark should be happy my OC (the picture) Isn't a human in that world, would Bass have heard that Mark had so much as touched Fluttershy the wrong way......Mark would end up mysteriously "missing"
4639436 and Applejack was Bass' wife in his world, even with Mark's burly look, he'd be fucked. I'm liking this story
4652002 I am so confused right now. I'm happy you're enjoying the story.
4652007 just a snippit from my OC's history is all