'Dream Killer?' Now I am intrigued. There were only two errors I noticed: In this fragment '...return perfect.” Mark held...' it should be Richard (especially seeing as how Mark isn't even present at the time). The word 'hates' shouldn't have the 's'. Just as a reminder, my "services" are still available.
4740405 The main problem is update speed, especially since only two more mistakes were caught. Btw, can you send me a PM with a little more context for that first mistake. I can't find it.
I Love it when this story gets updated. You portrayed quite an unique family.
4729794 *Jumbled flails out of happiness*
'Dream Killer?' Now I am intrigued.
There were only two errors I noticed: In this fragment '...return perfect.” Mark held...' it should be Richard (especially seeing as how Mark isn't even present at the time). The word 'hates' shouldn't have the 's'. Just as a reminder, my "services" are still available.
4740405 The main problem is update speed, especially since only two more mistakes were caught. Btw, can you send me a PM with a little more context for that first mistake. I can't find it.