This is the story of Maud,Marble,Limestone, and I. The story of our life on the rock farm. And frankly, how I grew up.
Hi! My name is Pinkamena Diane Pie! or Pinkie Pie as my friends call me.
This is the story of Maud,Marble,Limestone, and I. The story of our life on the rock farm. And frankly, how I grew up.
and I*
Anyway, neat little story. :)
I have no strong feelings about this one way or another.
4554517 What is that supposed to mean? It's my VERY FIRST story. Tell me whats wrong and I'll try to fix it.
4553171 Whataya mean? Its my first story! If you have any suggestions I'll gladly take them.
4555113 In the description.
4555123 lol, make them discription a little better?
4555130 Precisely.
"This is the story of Maud,Marble,Limestone, and Me"
Whereas it should probably be "This is the story of Maud, Marble, Limestone and I."
Maybe even longer.
But nice story.
4555139 Oh! well take you very much! I'll fix it right away! (this what I want from everypony..ADVICE!)
4555160 :)