A horrid outcome to the battle between Tirek and Twilight. A what-if story that takes place three years after the fall of the royal sisters.
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Well you are fulfilling the "tragedy & dark" tag quite well so far, even more so with this chapter. Still irksome how much of a pussy he is.
6566309 It's understandable. While Aaron isn't the most aggressive protagonist, I'd rather have him be as he is than overly aggressive. Though, that is to say that he won't stay how he is forever. i would at the very least like to give him some character growth over the story.
6566687 while i agree that he is kind of a pussy, but i am glad to see that the situations around him are slowly changing this. on another note i hope that alpha suffers a really gruesome and extremely painful death at aaron hands
6566855 Vengeance shall come, but in time. I want to push Aaron over a few lines he wouldn't normally cross.
Hmm, good chapter overall. The dramatic situation of the prisoners is well captured, Spitfire makes her appearance in the story, and Aaron is gradually growing a spine. Good job.
Now, that said, if you would excuse me a moment...
RAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH, I'M GOING TO KILL THAT MONGREL OF THE ALPHA!
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6567602 Lol, thank you. The Alpha Diamond dog shall get his just desserts.
The struggle bruh. The struggle is real.
Wow. Reading this chapter actually made me feel awkward. That's uh, positive feed back.
6573262 Thanks, any feedback is good feedback to me. Just so long as you aren't rude about it. Any and all criticism is welcome.
6567879 make him suffer
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6574538 I'm starting to see a trend here.
6585576 That's the joke. Anyway, I don't know what you mean by please respond the right way.
So far this story has been amazing but traumatizing at the same time but what I don't understand is when I click on the story why does it say you are pausing the story this story truly is awesome so please continue it
DAMN SON! FREAKING EPIC!!!
The Grey Army stands with you. We will slaughter the Griffons and Diamond Dogs as brother and sister in arms!
HURRA! LONG LIVE THE KAISAR!