A horrid outcome to the battle between Tirek and Twilight. A what-if story that takes place three years after the fall of the royal sisters.
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I personally think your story is great.
I may not read too many dark stories, but I think you add a unique twist to the dark alternate universe genera.
Keep up the great work.
This chapter was very well-written and I loved the interaction between Aaron, AJ, and Twilight, especially how the girls used most of the chapter to tease Aaron. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
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Same here. I want to get these chapters out faster and I want do some light stuff before things start getting serious.
Wow, the more the story proceed, the more increase my interest. The narrative pace is constant and I really like the interaction between the various characters. I'm particularly intrigued by the character of Nightmare Moon. Despite her transformation, she still cares about her sister. I wander what kind of deal she made with Tirek, maybe her loyalty in exchange of Celestia's life?
I feel stupid for not knowing it was Celestia ahead of time. To be honest, I thought it was gonna be rarity at first. (hints the reason I feel stupid)
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Its okay, we all make mistakes. Besides, I have plans for Ms. Rarity.
Hm. Been thinking that I should rewrite chpt 1 and 2. What do you guys think?
To see Celestia in this state and Luna forced to be Nightmare Moon and as Tirek's queen, it makes me sick to my stomach and heartbroken.
I will continue reading, but I don't know how long I can keep up with the grimdarkness of the story before it finally gets to me and stop reading this.
6373911 I have to agree, Tia and Luna are one of my favorite ponies. Luna, even as Nightmare, clearly wants to have things back to normal, and the deal was most likely that she be Tireks wife as Nightmare Moon for her sister to live. Knowing that Tia is most likely raped constantly turns my stomach. I'm going to do the same, plow on though for a few more chapters. But I don't think I can honestly handle this story with how it is.