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5222693 *Overpowered intensifies*
5222755 mate some of this story was written almost a year ago, the grammer and whatnot got better as the story progressed.
theres over 17 chapters and your on 6, keep going.
Ooh Eeh Ooh Ah Aah Ting Tang Walla Walla Bing ♪♫
5223094 *HILLBILLY INTENSIFIES*
I wonder what if the world map look like?
Maps
5224881 Pretty acurrate, but move the griffons kingdoms more the the right, and completely move Manehatten the the right side of Equestria, I like to think its connected to the ocean.
Everything past the Mild West belongs to the Diamond dogs and Minotaurs, the Soarched lands and Boarean tundra is were the dragons would reside, exept they are one giant continent on there own, and further away from Equestria.
Also the map doesnt list the crystal empire, which fills the area between the mild west, Equestra, and The griffon kingdoms.
Also note that I have yet to decide if I will be adding other races yet, so feel free to assume that the entire eastern Kingdom in the far right corner is a thing, but its currently unmentioned in the story so far.
with these alterations in mind, feel free to assume this is the Map Nova is using.
And as usual the military of Equestria has no clue
5225062 since when has any military had a clue?
They can only work within their orders and the information provided to them.
I don't like that in the earlier chapters you said this was the map: fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/335/a/4/equestria_and_beyond__rev_8_1_by_hlissner-d46wmzm.jpg
And now you are completely disregarding it and just say, they are heading to a city on the map that conflicts with what was said that they would pass by on the way.
Other than that i enjoy this story.
5228760 gee, sorry I couldn't find the perfect map that fits perfectly to my story.
read through the comments and you'll see I explained the situation with the map.
5230158
I aint got time for that! put huge plot holes that your sorry about in the "Author's Note:" at the end of the chapter
5230167 There, I fucking did it just for you, ya lazy entitled prick
Now stop having a heart attack because something isn't perfect.
5230711 *evil Idea's intensifies*
5230725
*fear-boner intensifies*
5253022 Please forgive the terrible grammar and sentence structure early on, it gets better past chapter 8 I believe.
wow friend your story grew fast btw I WANT MOAR!!!11ONE please?
5235065 Announcer: Anti-Alicorn Shotgun aquired!
again that ending!!
I just realized something important to ask: since Nova's a God, does that mean he can grant his clerics, paladins, and other worshippers, divine power (ala D&D)?
explanations are best when written in the story