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5164053 I'd like to see you bring the dead back to life after only having your powers, that your own mind can't properly handle, for less then a month.
Also it would ruin the story
I am still check on the map.
Btw...Next location is The Griffin kingdoms.
But still...Here a litter small location i can't think.
Kingdom of haven? Sound like it getting fun.
This is good, but it could use an editor. I mean, you have multiple people talking in the same paragraph, run-on sentences, commas where there should be periods, etc. etc. Just my two cents.
5165696 Will take that into consideration from now on, cheers.
5164069 plus, the devil and I wouldn't like it if he would do that. The devil wants to keep his population up and I don't want to escort a soul twice. Not fun.
nova .1 luna.0
keep up the good work
Read the story while listening to this...
(apart from the action bit)
5176868 I take your suggestion and raise it.
Then, when we switch over to Nova talking with Trixie, try this.
Actually you know what, Ima just add that now.
DUST:AET
the picture of the sword broke, to prevent this from happening I'd suggest putting in an actual description or put up a picture that doesn't break
[there was an arguement against long battles but magic is bullshit so the arguement is invalid]