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Finally, another Superpower Lottery Challenge fic!
4495860 That moment when the power was "Be a god but not omnipotent"
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So in other words on the same level as the Princesses.
4496223 you must be good at linking things together, I like you, and yes, the princesses and Novas powers will have similarities, but only in some places, all will be reviled
4496263 so things will puke when they see all?
Might want to turn that into revealed.
Eh the starting "Naah, lets not bother about the critter party party!" just pulls all the immersion from me. That was a bit too much of a crackfic decision.
Still seems like a solid story.
I can't deal, I'm out, it was a good 30 minutes but I can't take it anymore. The grammar is awful, I don't care if it gets better later you should fix your original chapters anyways. This character is dumb, what are his motives, why does he feel the need to test his new powers, why didn't he just try bring the ponies he killed back to life, or doing a reset on the whole mountain explosion thing. I'm sorry, keep writing you need the practice and this should be a good story to learn from.