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I like the idea you have hear.
But as i make my way through the first capter, it seems clear. You need a editer or read your Story a bit more.
You some how managed to start your story. ( on capter 1)
Then a cut, and everything start's over again. (still in capter 1)
I only had time for the first one but i will take a look at the rest.
4500247 Whoops thanks for pointing that out I quickly fixed that, if any mistakes like that pop up again please point them out, though they shouldn't considering I wrote the first chapter at 2 in the morning
Np, we are here to help ;-)
4501397 honestly I would be fine if someone just shoved it into the general "story" folder, but I guess the Humans with powers but not costumed would fit as well
4502231 Theres actually a funny story to that, you see, when I read the thread, I thought we could only get one power, so I only clicked it once, and I got THIS pretty much GG when I got this and I started the story right away, I went back some time after and read it properly, soooo in some future (very far future) you may see a story with
Temporal Monster Physiology (control time)
Magnetic Projectile ( Rail Gun)
Malignance Nullification (Fuck all attacks directed at me)
Eclipse Manipulation (I laughed at this one, a big fuck you to Celestia and Luna)
and finally Ice Manipulation.
4503485 if you feel up to it, please point out the worst of it, I sometimes write these chapter late a night, if not at least give me something to work with here, just saying "ITS BAD UURRRR" helps none
4503498 oh, don't paint me as the bad guy here. Have you ever little to no sleep, while at the same time, have Finals? Your Judgement won't be that great
4503659 Okay lets set some facts here, first, I get a fine amount of sleep, I just happen to write before I go to bed around 2, second, Finals? I don't know how young you think I am but I'm well past school, if you want nothing more then to come here, complain about something and then make no effort to try and help fix the problem that apparently bothered you so much in the first place, then just don't comment mate. I'm wasn't trying to paint you as a bad guy either, if you thought that I apologise but that kind of response was unneeded.
4503716 I wasnt complaining, I was making an observation. And, unlike other people, grammer doesnt bother me that much
4504060 All Right then, lets leave it at a simple misunderstanding
4504082 a.gifb.in/g600107907.gif
4504137 alright
My preferred music for Wrathful God transformation
it took me this long to say this, HE WENT SUPER SAYIAN 3
Welp, this is what probably happened afterwards