...now there's an idea. Maybe when this story finishes, you can write "Dinky the Rebel", a story of all the hijinks Dinky gets into, told both from Dinky's perspective and poor Derpy's.
Pretty good chapter, but it was littered with more typos than I remember seeing in the other two. If I were to point them all out, there'd be a wall of text longer than the chapter itself.
So did Babs have the foresight to actually ask her unicorn friend that her new appendage is infertile or is she just assuming that? I can buy not thinking about with Scootaloo because of heat of the moment. But not using protection of any kind or even just pulling out over and over again with the other girls makes it seem like she thinks nothing can possibly happen. If she didn't think to ask then they could all be in for a rude surprise.
Not bad. I personally feel, best chapter yet. The ending made me chuckle, that's for sure. I did notice one or two little typos..
wet cloud of semen with no end in stop.
Did you mean "With no end in sight" here? I also noticed the letter a missing somewhere in the first third of the chapter... Couldn't find it again. But loving this, and can't wait to see what happens next... particuarly now that it seems like Rarity is going to find out about Babs' little secret.
4697720 Thank you! I myself thought about it A LOT before writing it. I'm trying to give my best with every chapter. Hope you'll love the next one as well.
I loved it all it was awesome beyond awesome and I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.It was a read just like the others.it just keeps getting better and better.
and rarity is out fast, better hope molestia isn't near
-Rendered speechless...-
That was cool!
But now I'm wondering how long until "Rebel Dinky" becomes either its own continuity or a tumblr porn blog.
4683217 Oh, if only I could draw I would totally do that
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That would be a fun story.
...now there's an idea. Maybe when this story finishes, you can write "Dinky the Rebel", a story of all the hijinks Dinky gets into, told both from Dinky's perspective and poor Derpy's.
Good More rebel Dinky!
Rebel Dinky seems to have gotten popular...
Pretty good chapter, but it was littered with more typos than I remember seeing in the other two. If I were to point them all out, there'd be a wall of text longer than the chapter itself.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to Babs' train ride.
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Ouch. That'll have been my bad. Maybe a PM? I would greatly appreciate knowing what I missed.
Dinky didn't choose the thug life...
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It'll take a while to skim through it again and look for them, but I'll do it.
So did Babs have the foresight to actually ask her unicorn friend that her new appendage is infertile or is she just assuming that? I can buy not thinking about with Scootaloo because of heat of the moment. But not using protection of any kind or even just pulling out over and over again with the other girls makes it seem like she thinks nothing can possibly happen. If she didn't think to ask then they could all be in for a rude surprise.
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They are close enough to pony for estrus to be a factor.
Rebel Dinky and I was hoping Coco was with Rarity for sexy times.
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That's the setup for the sequel: Babs - Everypony's Baby Daddy.
4684966 Indeed. Now, once estrus becomes a factor is when the real problems start
Loved Sweetie adorkably failing at being a proper dominatrix.
Accidentally cuffing herself should be a running gag; it's just so her
Sweetie Belle is so adorable...
I have a feeling that Coco does many things to keep her new boss happy...
Not bad. I personally feel, best chapter yet. The ending made me chuckle, that's for sure. I did notice one or two little typos..
Did you mean "With no end in sight" here? I also noticed the letter a missing somewhere in the first third of the chapter... Couldn't find it again. But loving this, and can't wait to see what happens next... particuarly now that it seems like Rarity is going to find out about Babs' little secret.
4697720 Thank you! I myself thought about it A LOT before writing it. I'm trying to give my best with every chapter. Hope you'll love the next one as well.
I loved it all it was awesome beyond awesome and I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.It was a read just like the others.it just keeps getting better and better.
Mmmmm, best chapter yet! The light bondage(even though it backfired(or maybe especially because it backfired)) really is awesome.
4683217 Let us pray the various gods of fandom are watching over this concept.
I can't shake away the feeling that Babs Seed here has been turned into some free prostitute.