Borderline
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Very nice!
epic!
Awesome, the blood splatters were a creative touch
you said a lot in 0 words
593321 It's an image. The code doesn't count.
593186>>593202>>593251 what you guys said
i.qkme.me/35znym.jpg
593327
Brilliant! That's all I can say.
Very, very, very excellent. This fic really gives some support to the mess that was Cupcakes. Great job, would read again!
Holy shit, featured twice?!?!?!? Mother fuck!
I've totally got to read this now!
593391 Featured twice? Wat?
593403 This was in the featured box like... A month ago or something! That's why I even bothered clicking this at the moment! lol
I left a comment up there early on, too!
This totally deserves a second time around though. Are you sure you don't remember?
593411 I remember it being featured... but it's not featured now.
So it didn't got featured twice.
But yeah... about your comment... a friend herped the derp and deleted the last chapter... prompting me to lose it and all the comments.
I've contacted knighty about it... but I'm not sure if much can be done.
I read this a few months ago. But the SCROLL? GENIUS!!
how'd you do it? I wanna do something like that.
593429 Not featured my amazed PLOT!
i.imgur.com/QFIuI.png
I took that screenshot less than three minutes ago. It's the last one on the ticker!
593431>>593351
A friend drew the scroll for me... tomorrow (hopefully) we'll have another thing to make you fans squeal.
593440
WHAT?! HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE?! I don't see it.
WHAT SORCERY IS THIS?!
593449 I wonder if there's some crazy technical issue going on? lol... I'll check in a few minutes. This is weird.
593449 when I saw the blood splatters, something cracked inside me and died.
Yay i liked this story
At first, I was like "Why did Luce update this story and why is there no words?"
Then I was like mypokecard.com/en/Gallery/my/galery/UH5hF1by3Qq.jpg
593481 If knighty can help me un-derp the chapter my friend derped and deleted, tomorrow there'll be an extra extra.
Who knows... maybe I will continue this?
... nah.
Then I wish knighty the best of luck that he can do something
Now then, what do I (and the rest of your fans) have to do to convince you to continue this story? (Don't you dare respond with "Nothing LOL" or a
answer
593530 Well... I haven't established much...
And I've seen so many Cupcakes spin-offs that started good but lost it on the long run...
I'm kind of scared to carry on to be honest. I think I may destroy this story completely.
Still no recognition ;~;
I made this for lucy here by request and it seems the author's note was lost >_>
Damnit knighty.
Anyway...yeah.
Lurvs u lucy <3
593568 If knighty can't do anything, I'll re-write the thing myself and post it before the extra you've cooked up for me.
Blame this stupid retard laughing by my side.
... I swear I'll punch him when he least expects it. In the BALLS!
593539
Now dear Luce, you and I both know that is a complete lie. You wouldn't be silly enough to trash this story. But before I press on, I must first say (Sorry
)
"Cupcakes spin-offs that started well."
Anyhow, we both know that everything you write is a shining gemstone compared to the gray rocks that other stories are. This story is one of your diamonds. It is revered as one of the best Cupcakes spin-offs, having been featured for.... how long was it? Several days?
And although I agree that some stories are better left untouched, this story has plenty of potential and several unanswered questions along with the fact that I know you would be able to successfully deliver more to this story.
Why would you be scared to continue? It's a Cupcakes spin-off, that's risky enough. Look how this turned out. Why would you ever be scared? Afraid of disappointing your fans, doing something you regret? You've written plenty of stories. You've proven yourself plenty of times. You can go so far with this story. I'm just saying what you already know. So tell me, what do we have to do to make you continue this story?
(This comment should be deleted eventually unless you really like it.)
593601 Well... one thing is for sure; this story is better than most Cupcakes Spin-Offs out there (I won't say the best because I don't like to brag... but I've never read anything Cupcakes related that is at par with Borderline).
If I am to continue this story, I think I'll need to think about it for a few months... because, seriously, I'm not good at gore at all.
Amazing, just amazing. No words, except amazing.
593723 Damn straight!
593679
I'm going to keep on arguing. Mainly because I actually want to see this get featured again. and it's fun PICTURE!
i.imgur.com/uyUUo.png It's back!
Anyways, I said it was one of the best. I don't want to accidentally shame another Cupcakes story I haven't read that actually surpasses this.
Luce, you pretty much set the story up well enough that you could continue if you ever felt like it. I know you had envisioned all the possibilities for this story, every writer does. I know you were like, "Ah, that would be great for this story! But I'll save it for later if I want to come back to this story." You want to go into the details. The story of Twilight and Fluttershy and the rest of the Mane Six? You can see all the possibilities.
Your main genre of writing is Dark, which includes gore. You can't just judge yourself on how well you write gore, especially with your modesty. Doesn't your success tell you how well you write?
For a few months? I know you're busy for a while, but months? That's a long time. Seems to be an exaggeration. Summer's coming up. Free time is opening. You have other things to write. You said yourself you like Borderline quite a lot, why not mull over it a bit, and then continue?
593770 LOL, I don't think this will make into the feature box once more. MAYBE if my stupid friend didn't delete the A/N with those 2093489043 comments... and if SleeplessBrony's story wasn't up there... but I digress.
No, really. I love Dark... but I suck real bad at gore...
I'm not drama whoring or stroking my ego. I really mean it- gore isn't my strength... you saw what I did to Vanity. It taught me that I cannot write neither clop nor gore. Suspenseful dark, on the other hand... Even Griff, the reviewer at Ponychan liked it.
Maybe after Sand... I'll give this a thought. That is... yeah... a maybe.
593457 See? Nothing. I guess it was an error of the site or something.
593836 Yeah, it disappeared for me, too. That was odd.
593797
Oh gosh, 2 billion comments
Your friend must pay 
I told you that you're the only person I'm willing to read a goreclop from
And writing clop is so easy. True, gore is a bit.... eh, but still. Wouldn't it be an experience though? Testing your skills in the art of gore? Seeing how far up the mountain you could go? There only needs to be one path up a mountain. This story can be your guide. Get to the top, be amazing. Be wonderful. Write another bucking part for this story 
Sand obviously comes first. But a maybe? Only a maybe? Not a probably? Not a possibly? Not a 100% I am going to continue this fic?
At least I got you to a maybe. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
I is goinz to bed nao. Lul dream land.
Ha, at least with this featured again it reminded me to Watch you.
On the subject of continuing this story: PLEASE! If there's one thing I liked about how you left the story off was that there was the distinct possibility that the psychiatrist could actually be SAVED. Which would then entail having to live through not only the emotional and physical trauma of being a Psycho Pie survivor but also having no one there to help him cope.
That was amazing.
593836 read the “recent news” should answer your question.
This is pretty awesome. I love anything related to Cupcakes. But still feel like your story to this is incomplete. I love your take on it. But by any chance will be anymore updates or a squeal to this.
This is how you do a Grimdark Horror story.
593770 Um. No? Dark does not equal gore. Dark makes you feel uncomphortable while reading.
And dude. Give him some personal space. Planning and writing good big fics does take months. I simply love Borderline, and I could understand why you'd want more of the story, but don't pressure him into doing it dude. It's his story.
But back to Lucefudu, that is a mighty nice scroll you have there. Props to the artist who made it.
595257
Shots fired, shots fired! Get me mah lawyer!
The number you have reached has been disconnected. ........ Wat dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
I did not say Dark is gore. Quote "genre of writing is dark, which includes gore." Dark is not only gore, but it can include said subject. (Btw, uncomfortable)
Luce and I are friends, internet friends that will never meet each other, but friends nonetheless. He should know I'm messing with him. I wouldn't even come close to arguing for the continuation of a fic. More realistically, I would do the conservative thing and keep this perfect as it is. I'm just giving a different perspective into the matters.
I don't know how long it would take to plan a fic like this. Luce and I planned a pretty lengthy story together and it took all of.... two weeks? Quadruple that amount and then you have months? 8 weeks at the least. 56 days.
Am I pressuring him, or am I persuading him? Persuasion is power. Pressuring is, "You will do this Luce or else" or less extreme "PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more of this fanfic! PLEASSSSSSSSSSE!" He can do what he wants with this story. He has other fics to write anyways. I'm saying it would be nice though. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
Is it bad if i want to meet Pinkamina in real life now? B-b-because of this scroll?
595257 Props go to MuzzledElk. It seems knighty wasn't able to restore the lost chapter... I'll have to re-type this, then.
595500
There's another extra being cooked at the moment.
I really like it, and the blood stains, my only question is how did they get there? did pinkie steal the scroll and...
593449 you said more you did right if so recieve these 19 yays and a mustache
I am loving this!!!!
All my five R's goes too this fic!!
so...where's the pic?