Matthew was a normal human at one point, nothing special about him whatsoever. Until one day, he was pushed to the edge, and power rushed through his mind to his hand. Now he needs to learn to control it, master it. Hopefully, he's not too late.
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I don't mind op characters just how they're executed
To be fair to him how was he supposed to know that?
If you can't invent it themlves you don't deserve it.
I just hope that some multiversal being/beings/organization will give Discord a kick in the nuts and a warning that if he tries to give technology to ponies, crossing the multiverse, moving things like technology to other worlds that shouldn't have it, he will be punished along with his associates
The return of the king
Your story has 81 likes and 29 dislikes as of the writing of this comment. If you think that's a lot of dislikes, then you need to readjust your view of your story. Look, your story has an average like/dislike ratio compared to what I've seen in other stories (and I've read a LOT of stories on here. I could probably count them in the upper 500's at this point.). Chin up! As far as I'm concerned, you're doing pretty good! Don't let a few dislikes mar your view of the reception of your story. 65% of the people that read this story like it (it's actually probably closer to 75% when you account for the fact that likes/dislikes tend to favor dislikes. Those who are unhappy are more likely to voice it, after all.). Yeah, you had a bumpy start, but who cares? You fixed the problem, and now it's all good. You learned from your mistake, and have moved on. My point is that having a 65% like/dislike ratio is not bad at all, and you should be proud of that!
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I think Discord might "gift" them a nuclear bomb.
Lol, isn't greymane a house name from Skyrim?
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Fuck.
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Hey, it wouldn't be the first time someone has used it, lol.
Keep up the good work!
Hunderte like! Anyways this is quite the story an one that’s a unique take on HiE and I’m enjoying it so far. I do hope to see more soon!
neat stuff, gonna wait for the next updatr
I don't know what people have Against the story.
I like it very much. Keep up the good work.
Hey man. Nice story.
Liked the plot so far and the flow is pretty nice.
There are a few words spelled wrong here and there, but overall it's very enjoyable.
Good thing to notice is to always think about what is happening at the moment. E.g. where are we, who is there, what happens, are there any sounds or smells, can I describe someone other than what I already used?
All those things let you dive in the picture more and more and let you develop your world to its full extend.
Hope to see more of this little work of art.
Dragon
OK, just caught up with this one. Not a bad story and Im looking forward to seeing where the Author will take us next.
The Monk
"Turning to the now gaping Shining Armor, “listen you little turd nugget, this is the holidays. A time in which no one is supposed to be a dick to another. So how about you pull on your big boy pants, and act like the adult you are supposed to be.” -Morgan83