Matthew was a normal human at one point, nothing special about him whatsoever. Until one day, he was pushed to the edge, and power rushed through his mind to his hand. Now he needs to learn to control it, master it. Hopefully, he's not too late.
This story needs more readers! So far I've been sucked right in! A few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but nothing that detracts from the immersion. So far so good!
“No! NO! PLEASE STOP!” Matthew screamed out, fear starting to come out of his voice.
I understand people would panic at such a situation, I would feel scared too, but author, nobody with a single good brain cell would ever scream this "Please"
This story needs more readers! So far I've been sucked right in! A few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but nothing that detracts from the immersion. So far so good!
Also, I have the perfect song for this chapter;
Geddyup! I’m on board 👀
Good and solid start, feels like this story needs more readers.
I understand people would panic at such a situation, I would feel scared too, but author, nobody with a single good brain cell would ever scream this "Please"