"But Matthewfc, when you do get out of the hospital, please feel free to stop by! I think I can find you something more fitting then those… rags you have."

Matthewfc, all I’m going to say so far

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I English good.

thanks for the warning, there is a difference between being a mary sues and being overpowerd but i still hate both of those things so im out.

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Eh, it's not everyone's cup of tea, thanks for stopping by though.

I would like to say, I'm actually enjoying this. Just polish the characters personalities a bit and improve some spelling and I would say you have a good story! Keep it up!

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Thank you so much!

“Please, tell us the truth, we won’t be mad and we won’t hurt you. What is it that’s happening?” Celestia said. And while Matthew didn’t say anything initially, he was having a battle in his mind about it. He didn’t know whether or not he could trust these ponies. What if they started doing lab experiments on him? Hell, that was the reason he didn’t tell anyone back in his world and now he’s being confronted about something that he didn’t even realize he could do. But, he knew better, he wasn’t going to get away with this. Matthew let out a small sigh and looked up at Celestia.

“I… I have powers…” Matthew said with a shaky voice.

And just like that you lost my interest faster than a dog eating hotdog.
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"Well yes three, duh! There's you becoming a princess party, the get well party for Matty, the we discovered an alien party and then the welcome to Pomyville party! Four parties in one!" Pinkie Pie said with a wide grin of excitement.

Pomyville to ponyville

"I… won't but thanks for coming Raimbow Dash."

Rainbow dash

"I… won't but thanks for coming Raimbow Dash."

Rainbow dash

"I know you guys said she takes care of animals and shit, but there's no way she takes care of hundreds in a little cottage,"atthew said as Twilight slowly levitated a very sleepy dragon onto her back.

Atthew to matthew

“Powers? How so?” Luna asked.

“... I… Can do things with my mind… I… I can pick up objects just by thinking it and-”

Wow if magic is that simple, then everypony can do magic. Not only you, you know. Then explain why earth pony and pegasus can't use magic like unicorns? Because follow this logic of magic, anypony can use magic.

“I learned how to crochet!” Spike said.

“Nobody cares about that Spike!” Pinkie Pie blurted out. Spike looked down dejectedly.

Wow.. Don't be a bitch Pinkie. I like that Spike knows how to crochet

“Nobody cares about that Spike!” PInkie Pie blurted out. Spike looked down dejectedly.

I care. Don't worry, Spike, I got your back, bro. Crocheting is underrated.