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Eh, not bad...Spirit seems way to flawless for my preferences and you could use an editor/proofreader for some grammatical issues. All in all, I've seen worse and I've seen better. I'll probably follow in my off-time [gods know I have enough of it these days] and see where it goes. Though again, I think an editor would do you a lot of good to help smooth it all out.
equivalent 'we kicked Nightmare's vagina super hard'. plot should be flank. Several grammar errors throughout scentences structure could be better
good chapter "where are you going" "Back into MY kingdom"
King of the mountain and everything under it. Thorin can sense this disturbance.
4149930 Thanks.
4149990 I see....
4150153 BINGO!!!
4150100 Whoop!
4150450 Actually, plot is still the relative term meaning ass. Flank is just a softer way of saying it
For someone who's ancient he sure has a lot of mental issue still. By this point I think he would've gotten over the death.
4151816 Spirit is incredibly old, but Light had died technically thee thousand years ago, Sombra two thousand and Nightmre Moon one thousand. Since he is incredibly old, a few thousand years is pretty short.
4151308 Why thank you.
4154928 They still go by Earth's months and dates. Did I say which year it was? Nope.
Next chapter please.
This Is so weird... I have no idea how they can be so trusting. It's like "ya I have been keeping to the shadows for the past couple centuries. Now I'm going to tell you the story of my deceased wife to all you ponies I met 10 minutes ago..." *sigh*