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4145085 its pretty good.
4145421 Why thank you my good sir!
4145425 oh!......and in seconds of favoring it nother chapter pops up!............you're spoiling us with how fast all your stories are getting new stuff.
4145436 Eheh...my passion is writing.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
4145458 be warned for if you do it too fast-
you may lose inspiration-
and you'll have to
putting stories down
on the waiting list or-
cancel them completely!
4145479 Eh, I get like that, but I listen to some music, and BOOM! New inspiration for same story! Most chapters happen thanks to me listening to music or thinking through the chapters VERY vividly in my head. Meaning I have days where my mind is NOTHING but lines and scenes for chapters.
i like this chapter and this story keep it up
![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
4145491 hehe just like me ... can create characters...the story......background.....just not the actual dialouge.
4145603 I plan to. And thank you for enjoying my work. I am overly enjoying this story idea!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
4145607 He doesn't really know...does he?
The fact that we quite literally see and feel everything? Nope.
Still reading this but the number one comment I have for you have after 1 and a quarter chapters: GET A COPY EDITOR! The amount of syntax, grammar, and typo errors are driving me nuts. It's especially apparent in sentences that make no sense: "I believe in helping others, is a reward" The first part makes sense, after the comma, not so much.
Needs... Editing... Can't read... Anymore... Ugh...
400 year old twilight, is irritating need fixxing of your time line and other editing... sorry but im out
I'm going to do my best to trudge through this story because I know it is great underneath all the bad mistakes.
Oh my god...the grammar! THAT EVEN Worst THAN ME!
sorry, its a nice story but i cant follow it, the grammar is to bad, some times it seems you are telling the story from a 3rd person point of view, and some other times its first person, that and the amount of mistakes and grammatical errors on the story is making it almost impossible to read.
U know instead of saying the grammer is too bad to follow story why dont you all put what he missed down so he can fix it. Just sayin no ones perfect its why constructive critisim exists.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
Likin it so far![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Grammar is bad but I dont care so long as this story doesnt die. Im liking it so far and it would be a shame for us to lose a good story.