Hmm... maybe she'll be able to tell he is under spell. Probably not. Depends if want to keep dragging on the pet thing.
I'm hooked but my only thought is that Gilda seems a bit too well spoken than her appearance in the show. I remember her being a bit more rough around the edges.
I am glad to see another story featuring Gryphons. I have a soft spot for them and think they have a lot of potential. Surprised the father is NOT doing everything he can to try and undo the castration not that he knows he has a potential new species of Human on his claws. Specially a long lived one. Hopefully Celestia sheds some light(pun intended) on this situation. Though we will not know into what part of the YHaY time-line this happens until she speaks openly about them. Course I hope the idea that the father did that to a sentient being will make him very uncomfortable. I have to admit I liked the 'Vet' in that she was relatively more concerned with his health then weather her employer is happy.
Now for my critique of our main char. He is an idiot. He has made no attempt to prove his intelligence other then try and talk. No writing, no building of things, no tool use, I know he is not around a scientists to do tricks like tapping out prime numbers. But there are things you can do. Drawing out complex patterns. Just grabbing a quill and paper and writing out something is incredibly effective. Even if they can not read it seeing the same characters repeated in a long chain will often trigger some to think on this more.
The only other thing I have to say is...Why is it always Celestia going around saving the humans?
Quite simply, I am usually very very very anti-HIE, the closest I'll usually get anything EQ related. This however, was recomended to me by a friend. At first I was gonna pass, but something about it cuaght my interest... which usually leads to the land 'read later sometime..maybe...' Which it did, but out of a mix of boredom and wanting to read something involving griffons; I read it tonight. All in one go. I have to say I really love this... honest you had my full attention by the castration scene and had to see where it was going to go from there. So yeah... have a like and a favorite.
With all of the free time hes had, I am surprised he hasn't tried doing something more, then again being surrounded by apex predators of a type can do WONDERS for stifling any attempts at communication.
Crap. Celestia is there.
Hmm... maybe she'll be able to tell he is under spell. Probably not. Depends if want to keep dragging on the pet thing.
I'm hooked but my only thought is that Gilda seems a bit too well spoken than her appearance in the show. I remember her being a bit more rough around the edges.
"Just a quickie? "Double entender
So...will Max on this story?
Tigers can purr, but only when exhaling.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I am glad to see another story featuring Gryphons. I have a soft spot for them and think they have a lot of potential. Surprised the father is NOT doing everything he can to try and undo the castration not that he knows he has a potential new species of Human on his claws. Specially a long lived one. Hopefully Celestia sheds some light(pun intended) on this situation. Though we will not know into what part of the YHaY time-line this happens until she speaks openly about them. Course I hope the idea that the father did that to a sentient being will make him very uncomfortable. I have to admit I liked the 'Vet' in that she was relatively more concerned with his health then weather her employer is happy.
Now for my critique of our main char. He is an idiot. He has made no attempt to prove his intelligence other then try and talk. No writing, no building of things, no tool use, I know he is not around a scientists to do tricks like tapping out prime numbers. But there are things you can do. Drawing out complex patterns. Just grabbing a quill and paper and writing out something is incredibly effective. Even if they can not read it seeing the same characters repeated in a long chain will often trigger some to think on this more.
The only other thing I have to say is...Why is it always Celestia going around saving the humans?
Quite simply, I am usually very very very anti-HIE, the closest I'll usually get anything EQ related. This however, was recomended to me by a friend. At first I was gonna pass, but something about it cuaght my interest... which usually leads to the land 'read later sometime..maybe...' Which it did, but out of a mix of boredom and wanting to read something involving griffons; I read it tonight. All in one go. I have to say I really love this... honest you had my full attention by the castration scene and had to see where it was going to go from there. So yeah... have a like and a favorite.
5820845 Or Luna. She is bigger as other ponies, too.
With all of the free time hes had, I am surprised he hasn't tried doing something more, then again being surrounded by apex predators of a type can do WONDERS for stifling any attempts at communication.
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innuendoes or adult humor
~Squiggle-Squiggle~
Celestiaaaaaaa
snicker snicker
Dat was fun.
Moar chaptors plz!!!
6081677 Thanks for saving me the time of reading this fic.
Man, what a cliffhanger! Let's hope it continues, it's quite a good read.