Ah, I've been waiting for this! Gilda's a bit off... but I like she's nice when she doesn't have to show off for somebody. Maybe one day she'll learn. Sigh. And it's nice to see 'Dent' is turning himself around. It seems a bit easy at the moment, but I get the sense you're letting him get acclimated. These things don't crash overnight, I guess.

"splut"

Interesting... Makes me wonder how this story will do in the future^^

Nice! Hope to see more soon!

shudders

Brings back nightmares of when I got 5 stitches in my own junk. Don't ask. It's a long and convoluted story.

EDIT: Actually, I can sum it up in a few words. Freak Zipper Accident.

I'm surprised this story isn't getting more reception for how well it seems to be written and all that. sure, it isn't common to see a Gilda story, but you seem to be doing a wonderful job with the wording, personalization, and even punctuation. Not many errors, and what I see as errors might not even be for those that are really the true perfectionists. keep up the good work, it looks good, and I intend to keep following it so to see how this all turns out.

Keeps up the good start fav and thumps up.

Well, he had the suicide thing going for a second, but for some reason went full retard w/ bonus overdrive setting and somehow fucked that up. Hell, I'd think it to be easier to try and snap your own neck. Just requires a good grip and finesse. Why am I so depressing?! Fave anyway cuz I'm weird!

How the fuck did I not see this get updated?!

Very good, very good. Especially liked the suicide attempt with the water and food bowl.

You see that leash?
You see that hook/beam/something that a loop can go around way up there?
You see that chair over there?
You know what to do.
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When's the next chapter

When's the next chapter

And most concerns I had with the first chapter are put to rest. Here's hoping the quality continues. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

I still don't know how I feel about it.....faved but no thumb up yet

Dude...

I almost felt His pain...

Being nuetured Is not something id wish upon any man that isn't a rapist.

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