......I can't say I'm happy with this turn of events but I still keep an eye out for the fallout of this action....Considering Gilda views him as hers and she doesn't seem experienced in the ways of relationships she might become dependent on him....or a Yandere.
So, let me get this straight. You're okay with gore and slavery, but castration is what puts you off? Did you miss the dark tag up there? You come in to my fic, have the unmitigated gall to berate me for my writing, and then put it in your little reading section about it 'crossing a line'?
You've got some skewed priorities, friend. I'm not writing this for folks like you. It's supposed to be unsettling and off-putting and more than a little weird. Or are you unfamiliar with how the Your Human And You sub-genre works, and you decided to be some holier-than-thou schmuck clutching at your pearls because you found something that you didn't agree with?
I almost, ALMOST want to make the next chapter horrifying somehow, just to piss you and those like you off... but I'm better than that. I actually have a tale to tell with a quantifiable, meaningful story, even leaving the notably horrific parts of the work aside.
*Meanwhile*
Little Steve: You call me?
Steve: NO, FUCK YOU, GO BACK DOWN. NO MORE FAP.
Little Steve: Fine. Jeee, What wrong with porn game thing.
Perfect chapter. The story is developing beautifully.
......I can't say I'm happy with this turn of events but I still keep an eye out for the fallout of this action....Considering Gilda views him as hers and she doesn't seem experienced in the ways of relationships she might become dependent on him....or a Yandere.
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Huh, that was an interesting turn of events.
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So, let me get this straight. You're okay with gore and slavery, but castration is what puts you off? Did you miss the dark tag up there? You come in to my fic, have the unmitigated gall to berate me for my writing, and then put it in your little reading section about it 'crossing a line'?
You've got some skewed priorities, friend. I'm not writing this for folks like you. It's supposed to be unsettling and off-putting and more than a little weird. Or are you unfamiliar with how the Your Human And You sub-genre works, and you decided to be some holier-than-thou schmuck clutching at your pearls because you found something that you didn't agree with?
I almost, ALMOST want to make the next chapter horrifying somehow, just to piss you and those like you off... but I'm better than that. I actually have a tale to tell with a quantifiable, meaningful story, even leaving the notably horrific parts of the work aside.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Thank you Sir, may we have another.