not bad, considering you lost a ton when the site went.

Very good ma friend

good.. I like it. DANCING!

4033361 Wait. when did the site went? (go) i haven't see any problems

This really earns a Comedy tag, and yet manages to have some touching moments as well.

The reference by chance was 'Surprise' the first design that was present for Pinkie?

I looked at your profile picture, then, to see the banner of Lyra and Bon Bon sitting on a bench. I lol'd.

"Relax, Timmy. I might be bi, but you two are far too adorable together for me to want to muck it up.

Yay I have something in common with the main character lol

This is reference to Surprise from gen 1!

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I didn't know the main guy was bi.
oh well.

daww

"We can if you want, Zephyr, I don't mind." I shook my head.

Is Zeph talking to himself? Is Twi too?

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Yea its strangely written. Example:

Character A acts.
"Character A says something" Character B reacts

Its kinda unusually and often confusing to have the 2 characters on the same line.

Usually you have:

"Character A says something", Character A acts.
Character B reacts.

It doesn't have to be like that, bit that's the most common wording I found on this site and others.