I have some questions. What is Shadow? What does Shadow and Autta look like? You never described them. How old is Autta? She can't be too old, yet her mother left her five years ago.
He hoped Autta would stop asking questions but his hopes went fulfilled.
This sentence is incorrect. I think you meant that 'his hopes went unfulfilled'. I like the story so far. I just wish to know these things and I'm sure other readers do too.
I have some questions. What is Shadow? What does Shadow and Autta look like? You never described them. How old is Autta? She can't be too old, yet her mother left her five years ago.
This sentence is incorrect. I think you meant that 'his hopes went unfulfilled'.
I like the story so far. I just wish to know these things and I'm sure other readers do too.
3987118 Thanks for letting me know, I'll be sure to add descriptions in my next chapter , I'll also be fixing that typo. Thanks for reading!
it a nice story sad but nice so here a favourite
3988219 Thank you very much! I'll do my best to keep it going and making it better!
Feeeels...
i really want to know, are they ponies or something like humans here? It sometimeĀ“s sounds like their are humans i just want to know what is right^^
4091924 I think they are anthros if i last checked the tags
Crying yourself to sleep is the worse way to sleep I believe.
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You have experience?